Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 2)

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awsome_avi

@awsome_avi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#951

the fight !

i could really imagine dat !!!!!!

and then the limp !!!!!
i was only thinking how u wil bring them close. and u answered it !

u r a writer in whose stories we can actualy relate with the characters !

the minute details dat u describe abt the characters ! make us feel them !!!

i have read many writings bt none can take out the emotions as u do !

waiting with al my heart !!!!!!
for d next update!
update soon !:-)

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

I am liking the story concept. I am intrigued by the idea of Arnav in a situation where Khushi has a limp...will it make a difference or is even a consideration? Until now he has thought he is the one who suffered and she is a golden child who got everything ...almost a poster child for what 'normal' looks like...now what will he think?

Look forward to this journey... They both have insecurities... "his bitter past, her bubbliness, his silence, her drama and his anger"

Arnav is emotionally handicapped and Khushi is physically handicapped and both of them are connected to Sumar and currently arguing over who is more connected to him...bringing on...please update soon...

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#953

A wonderful twist...Khusi with limp :)

The insight into Arnav's past and what goes on in his mind ... what makes Arnav the man he is today and yet there is that child who is angry and jealous when someone garners attention and love of his parents (father)

love that despite the limp Khusi's is fiesty and give it back to him...

thanks for the pm

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#954

wow i dint guess that khushi might be having a limp in the story but a very good twist...
arnav is still a child at heart always feeling insecured that khushi is taking his place in the house
but it was really rude on his part to tell that he is his biological child...
even if khushi dint show it, it must have hurt her really bad on that line and even when arnav mentioned the possible reasons for the run away groom...
will khushi still talk to him on the open even after the argument on the table?
wonderful update
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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penguin143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#955

What a twist..!

never expected that..

now I'm waiting 4 Arnav's reaction 2 this..

Continue soon..n Thnx 4 d PM 😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#956

and we have another chapter
lets see what this brings us
a face off or just plain ignorance on arnie part
okay back in ten
and back now once again so lets get down with it shall we
aww so he aint all angry young man at least not for the business world
its another matter at home front hai naa
dont worry he shall let her in eventually for sure he has to man he just has to
aww he doesnt wanna show that side of him to the world and thats wise move i would say
oh dear he can keep it at bay from others but it sure is burning him ih hell right
gosh man so much damage khushi has to undo unknowingly too
man how will she do this well am confident she shall nomatter what he throws at her
i know i should stop bringing khushi in every sentence related to arnie but just cant help it
knowing that she is the only one to get though to him in the end thats all one can think of
well good luck with that mate
not gonna happen my dear man
and in fact if we know her which we do better than you soon she shall have you wrapped up in her finger too but of course unknowingly
she aint one of those who sets out to do things deliberately
bas aisi hi pyaari si hain ki bas dil nahin karta inke bina rehna
oh and she shall be family and not the way she thought but the way your father wanted to unknowingly
dude dont try to avoid her warna pyaar kaise hoga aapko
but then he is one tough cookie for her to crack naa but crack she shall
uff what do we do with him man
give her a some space man you werent here for what ever reason she was so of course your father would tell her
plus you are hardly at home so quit fussing please
wow she is good aint she course she is
the best person to deal with arnie is her only right
well this shall be completely silent with buaji gone
doubt he will say anything to her and she herself might not wanna say anything
okay she might say sorry to him about the whole fiasco that happened just while ago
and one was right but he still isnt making things easy for her
cant believe he actually told her that its best they avoid each other man thats just rude right
but i love it how she is giving it back to him though
you go khushi tell him that you will do what you wanna screw him man
dude you know you brought this on yourself
what was the need to go there man
but you did and so did she well why should she sit quietly after the verbal lashings from you
hurts dont it then think from her pov too mate but i guess that wont happen for a while huh
oh no he goes and does it again man is he gonna regret big time when he falls for her hai na
and we would want him to regret for all his outburst to her for sure
no sweetie nothing to do with any of those
well he shall and we know soon enough right why he disappeared
even though its good that he did but it still hurt her naa
oh boy he just broke the poor girl's heart didnt he
man so felt for her right there but this one can never stop can he
well its started already huh
dude you can probably spend eternity watching or swimming in those eyes
that shall lure you in into their depths
but that moment too went away too soon but then its just the beginning of a long life together for them both man
and he and we know about the twist
the fact that she limps but that hasnt stopped or handicapped her in any way
does that answer your question as to why her fiance legged on her
its her handicap but lets hope that doesnt hamper with your love for her though i doubt it
why becasue this is about making khushi his so duh he will have to fall for her even with her limp
that shouldnt matter to him later on or even now
so it begins the saga of our arhi with their face off
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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tashi26

@tashi26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#957

Superb update...khushi limps and this is the reason that jerk Shyam left her on wedding day and humiliated her...it would be interesting to read how arnav falls in love with her as he dislikes her so much right now...:)

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#958

ummm .,.. good twist...

but i dont want arnav to sympathise khushi. dont want his hatred towards her to turn into liking just by sympathy.

maybe he shud just start being civil to her and learn from her tht though life is not easy for her she still faces it without complains...

waiting for next part,,, sorry or no sorry??????

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#959

That was a turn of an event
Nice update

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shaheen

@Shaheen17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#960

At First they were fighting over FATHER! Like a kid n trying to hurt each other as much as possible...
And what was that khushi's physical disability? Bt thats ok coz everything s gnna be fyn at the end...
I m desperatly waiting to see their romance..the way they are fighting, i hv a doubt!

Edited by Shaheen17 - 12 years ago

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