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mastermagician

@mastermagician

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

phew...i didnt realize i was holding my breath till the end of th update!!! awesome!!!! fantastic!!!

it was as though i was in the car with Kushi and NK!! and how nice!!! Kush is adopted!! i was nearly gonna choke at Arnav's condition! Aww so sweet of Arnav!!! he knew his wife too well!!!

thanks for the pm dear😊

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Well ,you scared me again ...thought you meant them to be together in some land faraway ...😆

It was emotional and intense , especially the part about the orphan who found his family 'cause of a name and the colour of his eyes ...yes it was a happy enough ending and lovely to read , thank you and thnx for the pm dear.

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Brilliant!

Loved all the three update to bits!

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

That was one testing, hold-onto-your-breath update. The journey, the time, the distance and the uphold, all were such tensing. You kept my eyes glued on the screen, lady.
And adoption- I didn't have the even slightest notion that after the first encounter, Arnav would think about the child. But then, life's beautiful too.

Loved it V, really, really, really loved it.
🥳 for the happy ending. LOL

P.S- I know I res'ed. But, oh well.

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Thank you for the happy ending! The husband and wife know each other to well!

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Thank you for the happy ending, Vee :-)
Really good chapter. There was so much silent/hidden love in it.I really enjoyed reading it.
Cheers!

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Vee..., thank u for the pm n also 4 this lovely story of urs with a wonderful ending. I have to say, kudos to ur khushi, 4 the manner in which she dealt with arnav's accident. Loved how u have showcased the depth of their love in so little words. For me again the highlight of the story was the usage of those lines from hp n how aptly they fit in. Love, anjali.

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

ahahahaa, you used the Snape-Lily angle the whole way here. "The boy", who has "her eyes" and is an orphan no more. And Arnav is such a romantic"after all this time" and will "always be". I loved , loved loved this chapter V :) And yes, this is the happiest of endings :)