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dilectus

@dilectus

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Thank you my kishmish..for the full blown smile i have on my face, though you gave me 2 more heart attacks before that, what with the truck and non-stop bleeding. & maze aur leti ho hamare, sahi hai, "kisi ka dard kisi ke liye tamasha ban jata hai" (pun intended) 😆😆😆

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Beautiful story... short but very powerfull... there was so much depth into it... something that leaves u very content and happy..thnk u fr writing this.. :-)

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Indeed it's a happy ending 😊 . Loved the way you used " Always " Very beautiful and a poignant story ... Very precise and conveyed what it wanted to convey :) This just proved that they are made for each other . He thought something and she put those thoughts into action knowing exactly what he wanted without any hesitation !!!!!!! They draw strength from each other .

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awww That was incredibly beautiful.

Words fail me in telling you how beautiful the entire narrative was.

In just few lines and words you were able to convey arnav and khushi everlasting 'hamesha' wala love...

So while in IPK they got a Aarav i am glad that they got a khush...

Liza

P.S: Could i request you to PM me the next time you get around to telling another fab story. Do i send you a buddy request for the same??? Let me know. Thanks

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

that was real quick V!
i am a sucker for happy endings you know.
HP *sighs* i often use the lines from HP in conversations but only few crazy ppl lyk me recognize them.
guess you are as crazy as me 😉
and arnav's message to khushi
...the most beautiful woman ...

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Oh with three chapters you made a excellent journey.

Eyes do speak volumes, yeas it did. What a understanding couple. Just one sentence helped to make life change.

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

loved it
thanx for the pm

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Beautiful ending. I am no writer and don't have enough words of praise that might do justice to the story. The depth of their love, their understanding is amazingly brought out. Thanku so much for Fortitude. I m glad I read it

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

brilliant work dear...
i hv read all the chapters in one go n totally enjoyed this beautiful piece of writing...
amaxnggg...
lovd it...

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Awe...khushi ko khush milgaya...

Thankgod they r fine...

Y do people do all this bomb blasts n crime...milta kya hai yaar...i dont get it...

Really nice journey...thanx for making me a part...it was lovely