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awesome... beautiful update... loved it 😊

awesome n a fab update... 😊

What an update! Everything was written down perfectly. But out of everything gotta say what stood a part was the scene where Khushi was trying to sneak out and Arnav taking it in a total wrong way. That just shows everything Arnav is feeling for Khushi but unable to voice them out loud due to the beliefs he has instilled with in himself. Khushi took a giant step forward so I'm sure Arnav won't destroy the faith she has on him. And finally the the moment we all have been eagerly wating for, Arnav admitting his feelings for Khushi! He was utterly shocked about his own revelation so hope he won't run a way like a coward but will face it and give a chance to explore his new feelings😊Arhi scenes were exquisite! Great writing, waiting for the next update to find out the consequences of Arnav's self confession!

awwieee the realization...apt dialogue...loved the chapter!!!
edited
And with this post I am a GOLDIE now😃
Love!!!!!!!

" I Lov U Red....!!!! " Wat an update yaar...!!
Really Lovd it...
Cntinue soon

Why Farah, you didn't like what I said in my comment?? :(

Warning : 4 comments in one! (Away from town n I return I get 4 chaps)

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Okay I seriously didn't expect Sami to be the eye witness just like Ipk title track was no where near my mind while guessing!! But both were the best of choices! Apt!!

Aww my respect for Sami just grew 10 folds! You love someone and you also believe that you will have the happy ending with him but reality n fate has other plans for you! You find his happy ending is not with you! Hmm but she took it so positively and even boosted khushi up to go venture the forbidden land! Nish man!

Glad Sami is such a positive and optimistic character who can even make you feel positive! The way she came about the findings was outstanding!!

Part 58

Barely there blouse out! Lol and Haldi on him aww! Love how both have eyes only for each other amongst all the crowd!


And that Punjabi song! Hmm some movements due to it eh?? So upon the songs lyrics and Sami's guide she got to know what she wants!

Asr with or without the perks!! But it takes guts to decide something like that when all your life you just wanted the perfect wedding with your perfect prince!
but more than all that I suppose being with your loved one and he loving you back is all that matters at the end!

Part 59

Intense chapter!! A total change in the story! Didn't expect khushi to come out with the want and need! But nevertheless she had decided so I guess its natural!!

When khushi crys Asr dies! So true!! And when both happens readers get to read out of the box things! Atleast that's what I think!

Aww he was broken when he understood what sami explained! He completely got what khushi was going through except that she irrevocably loves him!

That hurt anger passion all mixed and helplessness! Go away! How is it possible?? she broke down and then said Make love to me!

So they take up that step! Hmm


Part 60!

They are one! And more importantly he loves her, that he realized! Superb Farah amazing way to make him realize!

They made love, all he wanted was to be in her in the first place but that's not what he thought about as soon as he got up! She missing by his side and thought she might have left him haunted him! Aww


Beautiful written, from both angles! Arnavs and Khushis! Splendid work man!

I just can't stop thinking about the I love you Red part! I so wish she's awake! But she's asleep I suppose!

Phew that was the longest I have ever written I suppose! But couldn't miss out on anything in any of the parts! The turn is just wonderful! What next?

Cheers

Holi, reminds arnav and kushi's cheeks. I love red.

Here Arnav's confession I love you red. What a long journey they went with ups and downs to realize this.

Loved the update.