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I was just checking up kn your update and guess what???
I AM THIRD
ON THE SAME PAGE AS YOUR UPDATE
THAT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME
Anyway a brilliant update
Okay let me ask you summat
Have you also got a BF who is as awesome as arnav
I mean you must have some inspiration to write these two's story so adorably
I am in total love with them
And what did arnav want???:(

oh my my my - updated - stalking pays - haha - lemme read

Loved d update
it was beautifully written
pls update soon 😊

This is for part 60(will read and come back with feedback for part 61) - Umm.. what do I say except I loved it? This is one of the best scenes I have ever read on this forum. The sheer simplicity and reality of it blew me away. It may not always be the man who would take such initiatives, not every woman is coy being too shy to take such a step. They are equal, they mirror their needs and the way you put it was just so beautiful.

He finally confessed his love for her. And I am smiling like an idiot. Even if it was only to himself, it was just so heartfelt. I just love them both!! 😃

You are so good Farah. Waiting for the next. :) I am sure it's going to be even better. 😃

Part 61 - Agar mei hi yeh updates padh ke laal ho jaati hu toh bechari Khushi bitiya ka kya hota hoga? Batao humein! 😆

Have I ever mentioned in any of my comments that I absolutely LOVE Khushi's family? I mean, they are everything you want a family to be. Reading about them just warms me up and puts a contended smile n my face. Their sheer protectiveness of Khushi gives just a glimpse of the depth of the love that they all have in the family. It is just so beautiful. :)

Arnav and his smirks and haughty commands to see Khushi - I will NEVER EVER get tired of those. 😆

I am sure that even if their family tells Khushi nothing, Arnav is going to get to know about it soon enough and I have a feeling that he would want to push her away further because of the fear of Khushi being tagged as a characterless woman in the future due to their relationship. I know for a fact this won't bother Khushi, but the dynamics that will play out hence shall be interesting.

You have put up a very good base for the future updates, I liked this very very much.

You're doing such a great job! ⭐️

what are you ...a horse...what a brilliant morning oops dawn after...liked the way you have made their interactions flow with glimpses of the night they have spent together...

Glad that Khushi was not there and she didnt had to go through the pain again ..but how long is the question...I am waiting eagerly for the day when Arnav will stand up for her...

Loved her dress..and the last para...gosh..I just love their eye interactions...

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I will put my comment for part 60 and this part together.
Everything magical the way they came together ..What a changed situation for them.. Arnav who never thought twice before sleeping with any woman ,was giving her a way out and Khusi for whom the moral , the family always held importance , now ready to overlook everything just be Arnav's..
Loved the way Arnav woke up in between and the first thought crossed his mind was Khusi. The realization of what she meant to him now and finally declaration to himself about his feelings was awesome.. I guess you have used the best part of IPK (saans ruk jayeegi) in one of the best part of SAY..👏
The morning couldn't be more cutter. I am really waiting for the day when Khusi doesn't have to go back anywhere and could sleep in Arnav's arm to her heart content.
I must say again , these people does a very good job in sneaking around.😆
Khusi's family is really nice. Thank God Garima didn't come last night to check on Khusi. I know the whole sneaking around would have been caught but i am more relaxed that Khusi didn't have to go through the heartache , humiliation and guilt .. Wonder what will be Arnav's reaction if he ever comes to know that ... I guess more coming in the wedding too..
Hayeee i can't be tired of their eye to eye talk... 😳 And after the last night , it seems more suggestive than before..
What's shashi and Arnav gonna talk?? Anything serious coming up ???

what the!!! this has got to be the cutest sweetest "morning after"...awww...he woke her up and she stood near the bed and slept..and he carried her all the way to the guesthouse...cuteness!!!! seriously Khushi is a cute Button and Arnav treats her like a child at times and then desires her like she is the only woman in this world...

Hey dear, See I was stalking your ff so read it before your pm.😉

The update was fabulous. I simply loved the way Khushi behaves with Arnav. Arnav pampers Khushi to the core. I loved the way he carries her to the guest house in the sleepy state. It sounded so romantic.❤️

Good Garima dint reveal what happened at the end of he function to Khushi. Khushi has really got a very good family in Garima, Shashi, Payal, Rohan and Madhumati.

Wonder what Arnav wants to talk with Khushi.

Please update soon.

excellent update farah - got to read it before the pm - iam happy about it - stalking really pays u know