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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah, fabulous. 👏 👏

Your update today was beyond beautiful in more ways than one, on an emotional level, on a physical level, and on an aesthetic level (& I am not talking about the way it has been written here, although, it has been beautifully written as well, barring the "talking dirty" bit which I can tell is not yours 😉... Just kidding 😃)

Their love making today was simply beautiful. It was a natural progression of their feelings for one another... It was a magnificent communion of two souls who were heads over heals in love with each other & who wanted to express their feelings at a physical level as well... It was love in its purest form, expressing itself through these two lovers. It was pure & beautiful & it was just glorious. No amount of societal norms & traditions can curb or taint what these two feel for each other and that was the beauty of this union.

I loved the bold & confident Khushi to bits today. Here was a woman emboldened by her love for her man, to take the lead... She felt empowered by their mutual feelings to lead a hesitant Arnav to their first union of their physical selves. At no point in time was Khushi nervous or hesitant or unsure. She was absolutely sure about her feelings for Arnav & wanted to take their relationship to the next level... Khushi has blossomed from a little crazy yet intelligent girl into a passionate & confident woman under Arnav's love & care, how much more beautiful can it get???

Arnav, the man with a hundred flings was nowhere to be seen today. Here was a man who was nervous & desperate for the woman who has come to meant so much to him in such a short time. He was craving her touch, her feel, her softness, to drown his whole self in her. Luckily for him, lady luck seemed to be smiling on him. Coz the woman who rules his heart was more was more than ready to accommodate his every wish... In spite of his own needs, he still wanted to give Khushi a chance to back out at anytime she wanted to...How much more sweeter can he get?? He is the epitome of a perfect gentleman. ❤️

When he woke up to find a missing Khushi, his instinctive fears kicked in. Only Khushi's physical presence in the room calmed his distraught nerves. Which led to his epiphany, "Khushi nahi rahi, toh Arnav ki saanse ruk jayengi!" Yeah, the man realized today to what extent he felt for the woman lying in his arms... That he was indeed madly in love with her... "I love you, Red!" Took a while coming, didn't it? What's he gonna do about it, will be seen later, but something tells me, he won't shy away from telling Khushi his feelings for her now... Only to be told by her, I already knew. LOL. He might be amazed & a probably a little disappointed that what he had just discovered was known to Khushi for sometime... :)

But something tells me, there will be trouble in paradise soon... Trusting Arnav to wake up right before dawn, not a good idea... A missing Khushi will surely launch a search party of sorts I am guessing... But I won't jump the gun, will wait to see what you unveil for us... Thank God you gave us no precap today. Nobody would have appreciated today's chapter half as much if they had read about something troubling coming up later... 😉

Great, great update Farah. Loved it. ❤️

P.S. I feel like crying right now, I wrote an extensive comment for you today & just totally lost it. 😭 So I tried to recall as much as I could, but it is nowhere near what I wrote before ... What you see above is a mere shadow of what I had written earlier... 😭 You can tell I am really upset because of that...
Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love you red aww loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ch59 - you have to be thankful for the cupid aka Samiya who knew exactly what to say about the song and when...Arnav was so attune to Khushi that he saw her crying and was frantic to know the meaning of it all
okay although he did get the wrong end of the stick as to why she was crying, he did think like that for her benefit
and you have to love the bold and truthful Khushi, who never hesitated in telling him exactly what she wanted
i love the faith she has in him and she also declares it that she has this full faith in him, that he wont hurt her if he doesnt want too
and then how she says there is no reason to wait as they are both each others, they have that right, and the no cheating exclusiveness which he agrees to straightaway shows so much change within them both
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ch60 - what can i say about this chapter
its amazing, it seriously is
Khushi fully giving herself to him, without hesitating, her actually initiating the whole process, Arnav giving her ample time to change her mind, making her aware without words that she doesn't have to go through with this even though she is the one who asked for it
i do find it hilarious how in the midst of all the passion she still has time to scold him for dirty talking😆Khushi is hilarious
we got to see a vulnerable side to Arnav as when he woke up with a start and he sees Khushi all dressed and ready to go without waking him up, he gets scared as he remembers issues from his past
she does well to reassure him and also knows what he needs and stays by him for a bit longer
and finally he admits he loves her, him admitting this to himself is the huge issue, more than if he says it to her face to face
fantastic update once again
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love you red!!!

Wowww!!!

Awesome update...

And they made love... became one...

Mind blowing update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey did u read a booke call the street car name desire?
In the book the main character ripped his shirt and broke all the lights during his marriage night. Don't mind please!... while I was reading the chapter I felt it was kind similar since Arnav ripped his Kurta too! That's why I am curisious ... That u might read the books.
Alright now the update
I just love it.
Finally Arnav realized that he love her...yeaaa!
U used the dialogue very nicely...sashe rug gayi...the dialogue remind me the romantic holy episode from ipkknd
Missing ipkknd sooo much
Thanks for the pm
Update sooon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update.
The whole scene was so
beautifully written.
"Khushi
nahi rahi, toh Arnav ki saanse ruk
jayengi!" just loved this line.
Finally he realized his love for her.
Waiting for next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg that's was awesome , beautiful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

First Lazy is dumping question upon question on poor readers with each update and now you, Juhi and K making Arshi do the deed!
What is happening in IPK FF world!! Arshi being Nike ambassadors (Just do it!) ??
Not that we are complaining you know.. Lekin bachhonki Jaan loge kya?

Well Jokes apart, Many readers like me were dying in anticipation of the update!
And it was stunning update! Well stunning especially for last 2 paras.
I loved both Arnav and Khushi in this update. Khushi was never more sure about this very crucial, kind of life changing decision. And then you could see a unique Arnav who defying from his primal hunger, was trying to give her a chance to back out so that she wouldn't repent this later. To save her from future anguish!

And as I said last 2 paras were just beautiful. Also what came out from Arnav's side was kind of plesant surprise for me! Lighting of Arnav's Love tubelight is no small matter right? The way he realized it was just awesome!! I just wish Khushi was awake to hear it!

I am waiting for tomorrow. I don't know what you have planned but I fear that love birds will fall asleep and Khushi's absence will be noticed and maybe their families will find out?? Well hope not so soon..
I think many readers like me have already told you. We are not bothered about pace as long as you keep churning out such amazing updates!
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Posted: 12 years ago
"I love you, Red!"

My heart, it speaks a thousand words
I feel eternal bliss
The roses pout their scarlet mouths
Like offering a kiss
No drop of rain, no glowing flame
Has ever been so pure
If being in love can feel like this
Then I'm in love for sure

Nothing more to say and you know how much I loved this update

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