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Posted: 12 years ago
A moment is all it takes... A moment is all it takes for a life to come into existence, a moment is all it takes to breath the last, a moment is all it takes to beautify your life and a moment is all it takes to lose your heart.

I loved the title of this chapter! And of course, Maggie was all too unintentionally funny with her cribbing about the various nicknames she's gotten. Do you, by any chance, dislike being called 'maggie'? 😆
Naina is very cute. A blend of innocence and contemporaneity. I'm liking her more and more with every chapter I read.

Sameer it is. Sameer Rana. I really like his journal entries a lot. They show him to be a confident young guy filled with dreams and aspirations, one who has the guts to accept whatever is thrown his way. Just like he has accepted he's fallen for Naina already.

One confusion. I don't know if I missed something vital or if I'm forgetting it. Where is the college that these girls are studying in? Not in Delhi, right?
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Posted: 12 years ago
One of the treasured memories coming up in the fifth chapter. Only now it was a panoramic view.
The bond between these three friends is absolutely adorable. I said in one of my previous comments that Naina is a blend of innocence and contemporaniety. I'm adding one more word to it. She's a unique person altogether! Who can think of showing their love by irritating the other person! 😆 But I really liked Naina's idea of a Tweety-shaped cake with 'Tweety' written on it. And the plan of celebrating their friend's birthday at midnight at her place made me love the two friends all the more!

Geet finding herself amidst the four boys in a bus was something that set my heart racing with fear of the unknown. Who knows what could've happened had it not been for Sameer who showed up at the right time and intelligently outsmarted the boys. With this one act of protectiveness towards Geet, Sameer really has impressed me. Him acting on the right time and then dropping her all the way to her destination.

So now I'm done with catching up. Bring more on! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


Where are your fingers o great one...❤️



Where is my back to back update...

Jhootha pyaar hai tera... 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for being MIA for two days now...Have been working on this story...hope to come with update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Sorry for being MIA for two days now...Have been working on this story...hope to come with update soon...

Yayy!!! 😃
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Onir quick question...which update you want? Wol or TPOD?
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Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Onir quick question...which update you want? Wol or TPOD?

Both... (Greedy me... 😉)
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Okay, greedy DD, which one first?
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Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Okay, greedy DD, which one first?

TPOD... I want the mystery out first... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm ready Noodles...

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