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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#411

Amazing...

He named his son Atul...

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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-KingSlayer-

@-KingSlayer-

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#412

Hey 😳

Just read the whole thing in 2 hrs and man are you brilliant or what ? 😲

It was my first time reading a fic on a telly couple and tbh I wasn't expecting this level of maturity ( I am really wondering how old you are 🤔).

I mean the way you developed the characters of Armaan & Shilpa as well as the others...completely different from their onscreen personas, I toh just loved it.I think thats the most strong point of this story - the characterisations and you pulled them off amazingly.I could totally picture them shouting at each other,going berserk at each other and wanting each other the very next moment ( so effing KaShlicious)...God the intensity...you portrayed it all quite wonderfully.

I am not generally a fan of humour element while reading fictions but I enjoyed it so much in this one, Shilpa's interactions with her pets are so f**king adorable 😳 and ----> " I got the Moves like Jaggers, Armaan is my Beggar" 🤣🤣🤣 you killed me with this one. And yeah the title is quite catchy too.

I haven't read any other work of yours but I can see you have quite the ability to explore all the genres be it angst, passion,a bit of suspense,humour and emotions. I am really looking forward to read your other pieces.

You did an awesome job with this one👏...made my weekend😃. Keep it up 👍🏼

Edited by -KingSlayer- - 10 years ago

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Gurpreet16

@Gurpreet16

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#413

Amazing story

finally the story is complete ...so happy

really enjoy the story

shilpa is so crazy must say...

Totally loved this story ..👏

beautiful happy end

Thanks for pm 😃

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#414

You always leave me speechless Rida...

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swetha

@bary

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#415

better late than never
its been so long i read anything in I-F
thank god its your completed ff...😆
i actually cried when i got to know of atul,he is a fav char of mine ofcourse all of them and when reading about it just made me all emotional and when shilpa is heart broken when muskaan didnt share it with shilpa...that is a pretty good one...
in all awesome ff...
hope you remember me...😉
Swetha

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#416

Aweosme ff ...
Jusr loved it <3
Shilpa is sooo bold and carefree ..,,just love her antics ...
Armaan made a zoo .,..,wow
ArSh named their son atul .,,
Keep writing more !!
N do pm me if u start a new one :)

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#417

wow..this is rommantic...hot sexy...in one awesome platter

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Pakeez Muqadas

@Mpakeez

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#418

OMG ...
I have No words To Xplain wat Xactly I am Feeling..
Diz surely Z 1 of D best Piece of Work I have Ever Read...
I knw It Z very difficult To write Humour.. but U wrote So Perfectly...

Thnx For Diz Amazing WonderFull FF/SS..
I am Not Fan Of ArSh Writing & I hardly read Anything related to ArSh..
DMG for me Was, Is & always Will B AR..
But Diz Fic Was 1 of It Z Kind..
& Idiot will Missing Diz Kind Of Writing...

Armaa & Shilpa Both In diz Fic Were So different.. Perfectly written..
I fall In love Wid Dem B'coz Of Ur wrting...

Thank U 1's Again ..
Thank U soo Much..

Stay Blessed
& Keep Smiling..
Take Care...