Virman ~ kesharia balam, part 11 n 12

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tanishalnk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Awww it's amazing...virat manvi pe starting se latoo ho gaya...thr cute relationship...cute kissing scene just fab...mera gal gila kar diya awww...plz update soon nd pm me plz

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

very interesting..its different...
The end was so cute..😊

Wanna knw wat happens wen virat is bke will he be the same

Update soon and do pm me

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Dorae

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Such a awesome and cute update aww...👏.

While reading I felt like pulling the cheeks of virat and maanvi 😆and the feeling in me was brought by you by creating the naughty virat and shy maanvi*such a cute kiddos they are*.

Maanvi "the princess of family" and virat "prince of our sleeping beauty".

Thanks for the pm❤️.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awssum updates dear...

Luving this cute possessive Chotu Virat whoz completely obssessed with baby Maanvi...u hav beautifully described Virat's innocent luv for Manvi very well...shez his Amanat...aww...his charming princess...N Virat ..her superman...😳😳😳

Manvi : mela gal gila kar dia...awww...uber cute...cudnt stop ROLF at dis 😆😆😳

Plzz cont soon...Thanx a loot for the pm!!

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CHANDANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Aww... little manvi and little virat are sooo cute...

Continue soon and please pm me...

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Ashvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

awesome love story of two kids nice

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part -3

Lambi judaai k baad aya pehli mulakat ki pyar v saugaat.. Kolkata -America and 12 long years without any contact, did love and attraction still exist in their hearts? This was the question that was troubling all the elders of both family, and now they decided to bring dem face to face.. All dese years virat was left to fly free with new hopes and plans with a name always attached wit his name dat of manvi whereas manvi amidst all was always reminded of her prince. She was the youngest among all sibling but was the only married one so wenevr her grandma wud sit wit da girls she wud narrate the stories of an unknown charming prince riding a white horse wud cum and take dem away but manvi's prince always had a name, an image and dat was of virat.. The elders of both da families always keep dese two parting souls reminding of dere soulmate..

Virat's father selected jadavpur university for virat to cmplt his masters electronics. But why? Why had he planned to send virat in kolkata for further studies? It was true dat ju hold one of the mst prestigious and top rank in India but for sumone residing in america it was a bit weird, but it was actually a part of his plan, no not his own but of both the families as manvi joined dis institution for her ug degree in english (:-P lol manvi is getting into me:-P) so it was a perfect timing to bring dem face to face.. The elder had a fear of... kahi jawani mei inka dil na phisal jae.. So dey brought the idea of bringing dem together and it was pre fixed dat wit manvi turning 21 she will be married off again wit virat but dis time she will accompany him to his place. All was fixed and the toughest job was still left and dat was to convince virat. First dey came with da issue of jeevika's mrg for wich dey r to go back in kolkata and stay for a year, but da course was of 2 yrs.

Virat was always a tough nut to crack and so his dadaji tuk da chrge to cnvnce him.. D- virat, bache tere dadu ne tere liye mast intezam kiye hai. V- kaisa intezam dadaji? D-dkh ye 2 saal to manvi k institute mai admsn le le aur apni biwi k sath wo kya kehte hai.. Ha dating shating karna. V-kya? Kaisi baatein kar rahe ho dadu.. D- abbe samne se offer de raha hu, nai chahiye? Kaisa ladka hai tu.. Are jab main teri umaar ka tha teri dadi se milne ko betab rahta tha aur ek tu hai.. V-kya dadu aap mere studies k bare mei baat kar rahe the ab dadi kaha se ayi? D-baat to ek hi hai. Acha bata tu jayega na padhega na? Isi bahane mujhe v apne dost k sath 2 saal mil jayenge. V-maine kab mana kia tha? Par pehle main instut ka infrastructure dekhunga fir hi kuch dcsn lunga. Done? D-ha done.. (in his mind)woha tujhe aisi structure milegi ki tu to wohi rehna chahega..(smiles) v-ok dadu mai avi chalu packing v karni hai. D-ha ha barkhudar jayiye jayiye ache se packing kariye. Virat leaves.

Entering his room virat rushes to his cupboard and bring out something, actually a picture of a six year old girl and kisses it.. V-hi meri pyari mannu.. Pata hai sab ko aisa lagta hai ki main tumhe vul gaya, mujhe tum mei koi interest nai hai.. Par aisa kavi ho sakta hai kya? Kavi nai, is janam mei to nai.. Actly kisi janam mei v nai.. (smiles) ab tum se milunga 12 saal bad par kya in 12 saalo mei tum he kavi meri yaad ayi? Kya tumne mujhe utna miss kia jitna maine kiya.. Kya pata sawal hazaroo hai par inke jawab sunne se dar lagta hai.. Dar lagta hai ye soch kar ki kahi tum mujhe vul gai to.. Nai vulogi na mujhe? Batao mannu.. Jeevs-ahem ahem. Kya ho raha hai romeo ? Apni juliet se bate? V-di? Aap kab ayi? Aur apko sharam nai ayi chup chup k yu meri batein sunne mei? J- hmmm.. Nai ayi.. Hehehe. Chal mai tujhe yakeen dilati hu manvi tujhe nai vuli hogi. V-sach di? Par dar to is baat ka lagta hai kahi wo badal gai hogi to, ab usi meri zarurat na hoti ho to?...

Whereas in bagbazar ganga ashrit was decorated like a newly wedded bride to welcum da return of dere frnds cum relative. Dey too took the initiative to renovate tulsi nivas as its owner will b back.. Every eyes n heart were longing to meet dere long parted frnds but a heart was dere dat was busy beating fast and two eyes filled with anger and fear.. After a week's dose of teasing and annoying manvi was too much irritated.. She rushed to her room, closed da door and faced the big picture hanging in her room's wall.. It was a big wedding picture with four royal chairs, on the left were inder and kadambari jst after dere marriage and on the right were tiny figures, a boy of ten clad in deep blue sherwani with a royal pagri and a sweet little girl of siw clad in rani pink lehenga and traditional small jewelleries, both holding their hands and smiling widely. A 18 year old manvi's image reflected upon da picture and she looked directly at virat's pic and spoke out- I HATE U..

So dis is all for today, so here i hav shifted da entire story to present time and flashback will come peeping in between as dats da way i write. So be fair enough to give cmnts and snd me buddy rqst if u want pms.. Luv v..

Edited by Bhabani90 - 12 years ago