Virman ~ kesharia balam, part 11 n 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So this is my 1st ever creation in if, m a regular writer in tvc but here it my 1st one so m too nervous n xctd at da same time.. So here it goes.


*prologue*

"Marriages r made in heaven", this is wat people say.. Ma says its a collaboration of two individual but dadi says there lies a bigger macrocosom behind da whole marriage affair nd thats about two family coming together creating new relations. But how can be it so?? How can two peoples live their life wit each other without knowing each other, without love nd without their will?? But all this questions are only to for my diary i can't throw them upon society or my family as my destiny was long ago written.. Yesterday was my 18th birthday i just stepped in government's official age for marriage but i am long married.. With my 18th birthday it was too my 12th marriage anniversary.. Ya u heard it right 12th.. I was married to my grandfather's best friends grandson.. He was 10 n i 6, we hardly knew the meaning of marriage nd we were tied to an lifelong relation.. After a month of da whole marriage thing his family shifted to America and i was left behind to be brought up here in Kolkata.

So tell me hows it??


Index:

part1- pg 3
Part 2 - pg 4

Part 3 - pg 7

Part 4a - page 10

Part 4 b - pg 13

Part 5 - pg 17

part6 - page 21

Part 7 a- pg 26
part 7b & 7c - pg 33
part 8a - pg 36
part 8b - pg 42
part 9a - pg 49
part 9b - pg 50
part 10a+b - pg 53
part 11 & 12 - pg 56
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Dorae thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept or can I say different concept😊.
They are already married before 12 years when they were kids.
Now waiting for story, "How the marriage thing going to unfold their lifes?"
please pm me when you will update.
I am sorry but can you tell me the meaning of title.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonu0111

Nice concept or can I say different concept😊.

They are already married before 12 years when they were kids.
Now waiting for story, "How the marriage thing going to unfold their lifes?"
please pm me when you will update.
I am sorry but can you tell me the meaning of title.




hey thnx.. Is actually a rajasthani word or phrase used for beloved.. Snd me buddy rqst it will be easier for me to snd pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo bhabes for ur new story and ist story in if.,
seems intresting waiting to read more

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting n different too
Wud luv to read plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar update next prt quickly nd plzzz add me to ur buddy list plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haww nice concept dear
it's true that couples are made in heaven. but so soon in the early age of life even they were not adult. omg that's the biggest curse of our society.
hmm virman's are already married before 12 years. it's intresting. i would love to read it more. and congrates for your first ff
cont soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prologue bhabani
happy to see Kolkata connection here


continue karo and PM o
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh dear... its good to see u starting new ff...
first of all BEST OF LUCK...
now coming to prolougue...
u nailed the concept dear... i looved it to core...
its fab.. u should continue...and take me in ur regular readers...
i will be waiting for ur pm...
love u ... bye...
shilpa:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept👍🏼
plz continue it.would love to read it.

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