SS :A Night in the Rain:ArHi-Part 4b pg 43 updt - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
Very captivating priya.. Bring it on... would love to read the next chapter...

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Waiting for part 3
Update soon...plz
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just one word...
Beautiful👍🏼thanx for teh PM
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Waiting for the next part priya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Didn't know you had started a FF. Came across this by chance.
Read both parts. Loved them. Very intense story.
What is Khushi's relationship with her boss? Who is the child?
Hope ypu update soon. Could you please PM me when you update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
its really kool...new concept..new story..separation turmoil love breakup feelings dismay...everything was there...
i toh loved it

do continue it please..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next part Priya. Please update soon.
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Uncomplicated (adjective.)- simple or straightforward; Not

complex or involved

You indeed is the missing part of me...

the simple miss love of my life...

It's feels like... millions parts of pieces nothing ever a reason...

Nothing makes any since anymore...

and when my world crashes down on the floor,

It's broken up i need your love to put it back together...

mend my broken heart.

And there you are it's like I'm staring at...

a missing part of me look into to your eyes

And it gets hard to breath. When everything gets crazy...

you Uncomplicated

They sat throwing pebbles in the Lake and watching the ripples...it was a cloudy morning...there was that wet smell of the earth in air. The ducks seemed to enjoy as they floated in the Lake...the monsoon mornings in Kolkata brought the calmness in her heart which the restless, sleepless night could not give...

"Khushi, why are you confused...you should stay with him when he wants you to.."

"We hurt each other a lot when we stay together"

"But you also cry a lot when you not with him"

The sound of splash...the ripples that followed...she looked at him...Anshu wasnt as pensive as her...he said it as a matter of fact,she thought.
"Yes...but that is easier than spoiling all the good memories we had together...and...''
"Are grown-ups always this Complicated Khushi..."
"I think so...yes..."
They kept on throwing the pebbles...the chirping and playing sparrows around giving them company...squirrels scurrying around stopping once in a while to give them occasional attention...
"Hmmm...Does dad like him? "
"I don't know...they have never met.."

"If you go away with him...will you not come to see me?"

"I am not going anywhere"

He was this close at the dance last night...she could still feel his breath on her face...the whispers in her ears..."Like a storm in the desert..."
"Khushi how was the party last night -- did you dance?"
She jerked out from the trance..."hmmm..."

"Yes...party was nice..."

"You danced with dad ?"

"Yes"

"And with him..."

A long pause...only the splashes and the sparrows...
"Yes..."

"Khushi can I see him once"

"No

"Please...

"It's not simple...you know that"

"I know...ok some other time...I like watching these ripples..."

"Me too"

Thunder clouds roared above...

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Last night - her smell...touching her after months of yearning...
He paced up and down the make shift office in his room as he went over the presentation slides...
The phone rang.

"Sir, there is a confusion -- we are not able to get the stall allocated to us"

"What the...what are you saying...in an hour we start..."

"There was some miscommunication with our booking team back in Mumbai -- and instead of stall they have just allocated us part of the platform near the stage and that's too small for our requirement."

"So sort it out -- what are you telling me -- pay more money -- get what we need"

We tried that -- but organisers are not budging --the bookings are full --all international delegates and their stalls - nothing can be done at the last moment -- we spoke to their Events Head already. Only suggestion if the Hotel MD agrees to compromise the plan -- and we thought it's the best you talk to him.

"Put me through -- "

"Sir, his offices are just couple of floor down - I fixed an appointment in next 10mins for you - in person,if you could.."

"Okay..."

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ASR, impressed by the oak-wood decor office, studied the man sitting opposite...and then his eyes went back slowly to the object he has been looking at last few minutes...

"I understand Mr Raizada...there were some miscommunication'but the stalls are all occupied now. Last minute changes not possible."

Shantanu knew those fiery, restless eyes were taking in only the photo frame kept at his desk- smiling Khushi and Anshu hugging her - a vibrant image and at the spur, he had captured the moment few months back...

Without shifting his gaze,ASR said firmly -

"What I set my eyes on, I get that ! Mr Ray, no issues ,I'll go with my space allotted but if I recollect the floor plan , the way to main ramp displaying the merchandise is via the front desk of my space - well, I am putting out my mannequins there...you see I need to adjust in the space we have now...but am sorry, it will block the way to the stage...he paused and then stressed..."hope you all can adjust with any alternative'."

Shantanu studied him -he was a man on mission and he also knew the answer '"there was no alternative" in this case...not even the other.

"Well, Mr Raizada...let me see what I can do..you can take the stall that you initially applied for. I'll talk to the delegates setting their shop there..we sure can work it out.

ASR stood up . "Thanks Mr Ray, will see you around."

As he shook hands, Shantanu was calculating ..."how soon will that be''..they all were running out of time - he, Khushi, Arnav..and Anshu too.

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Noise of applause still followed outside the hall, International buyers had loved their line. Media too impressed by their stellar presentation and expansion plans were crowding in for press bytes...With just a word to his manager, he had silently left the hall and walked down the corridors. A bell boy had told him she was in the hotel and had gone up to the office floor...

He walked down the passage -- up the elevators -- counting each moment -- and scratches of a year back memories thronging his heart -- the applause and the smells of the hotel had knocked his heart - Khushi smiling with that kid...Wasn't it that day too -he was looking for this smile on her face - the day when he had erased the careless laughter of hers...which he so missed -- in his nights of darknes...- that evening too there was ab applause that had filled the hall, when AR was announced at the best Business house in the capital - there had been a fashion show hosted by AR to grace the announcement -- it was a proud moment...

Khushi had never doubted him a moment with the other women he met in the parties -- the insecurities that a wife in glamour world was always struggling with...that evening too when Khushi had suddenly come to appear, when he was talking to that woman, who he had not realised,during the course of the conversation and the admidst the crowd ,had come in uncomfortably close next to him.. the angle at which Khushi saw them was instigating -- but even that had not disturbed her as much...she had stayed calm -- 7 months and 25 days of pregnancy !
Indeed they had enjoyed the happiness, dreams of a new life to come amongst them for last few months and all that and more which two orphans who made a couple would want to give their child...but Khushi was well aware of his insecurity and fears...his fears...thats why at the sit-down dinner at the party -- when he had got up to offer his napkin when that lady had spilled the wine on her dress-- something had suddenly rocked Khushi's composure-- she realised it as the intrusion of a pregnant wife at his glamorous party - the shifty eyes of all the people at the table had made her insecure -- and abruptly leaving the dinner table at that very moment -- a message to the winds in the room at that time -Mr Raizada's wife did not take well his handling the napkin to the model -- the rumours of his having special attention to the model had rocked the gossip pages for few months -- ASR knew it was a part of the job and he had always craftily handled the media hullabaloo for years -- and Khushi too knew that very well...but he knew Khushi was at that time insecure about - his insecurities and though what no one knew --how scared he was of the "baby"...she knew his escape mechanism and had always thought he was running away from taking that responsibility..

He had stormed after her - running down the corridor to catch up with her...he had pulled her arms -that time he was mad at her .

"What's wrong with you...why are you are embarrassing me ?"
"Arnav ji, you can go back and enjoy your party, I am going home...now"

"Khushi, stop making a scene- press is there...you know how important is this for me..all the guests at the table...why did you come away like this" , he pushed hard at the retaliation...

"You carry on...I was wrong to come here in the first place."

" Okay...Khushi...take it easy...relax."

He tried to reason...people were watching...he sensed...

"Arnav ji, your special guest must be waiting for you inside. Go back !"

"Khushi, you doubting me ? You know there is nothing.." ...the tension between them crowded the corridor...

"I am not doubting you and I know you very well..but I also know better than that at this stage I scare your space...you are claustrophobic around me.Arnav ji, she or the people at the party soothe your nerves...no fear of a baby.."

He had it then...he took her hand...and started walking towards the car -- twisting her wrist with the frustration and lashing the words between gritted teeth...

'You know how important is this baby for me Khushi...you know that..yes it scares me...yes, being around you right now makes me run away -not because I don't want the baby.. only because I don't want to lose you.you know my fears very well.."

She pulled her hand back with force and returned his gaze of fire with the same intense .

"I have lost my baby once, not this time... your past and insecurities is not what this baby is about -don't let your fear possess me."

He remembered the drizzle and the sounds of rain on the windshield later... the shriek and the silence.

The sound of elevator stopping brought him to present..

She stood there..at the end of the corridor...long, narrow...heritage corridor...vintage Kolkata black and white images adorned the walls..he slowly started walking towards her...the passage was dimly lit..the lights from the bay window streamed in faintly through the blinds...

Khushi too saw him walking towards her at that moment...it was always so "simple" to sense his presence .."don't make it hard please this time'." She prayed.

His profound, slow walk towards her brought the memories of an Anniversary night, when he had flown her down for a surprise to a royal haveli in Jaipur...that night when at first how they had engaged each other in the passion... her running down the corridors in bare feet, trying to give him a hard time at finding her in the maze of pillars...the sounds of her paayal breaking the silence and he calmly walking down to her and finding her behind a pillar and grabbing her by the waist and kisses on the neck, "don't you ever try run away from me ' I will always find you'."

A tear rolled down her eyes as Arnav came and stood in front of her then..the lights of the window now on his face...capturing the moistness in his eyes.

"Khushi..."

"Are grown-ups always this complicated Khushi''.Anshu's words echoed as her hands ached to trace the curves of Arnav's face...touch his heart...as her tears kept trickling down...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lcISQgbH5XU[/YOUTUBE]

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Note : Apologies for the delay in update...thanks for everyone who left comments and likes and messages appreciating and words of encouragement and also for waiting for the update...means a lot...
Had thought of ending the piece in 3 parts -- but I want to travel the course of this story for some more time -- seperations and unions are a journey always -- we meet to part and we part to meet -- I am still exploring this piece and it is yet to run its course 😆
Thanks if you read till here -- please leave your thoughts or messages if you like -- always helps a writer to know the direction is right or wrong and learn from the mistakes...
Edited by honeypriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Priya 🤗...finally you updated the third part...and I can say that it was worth the wait 👏 👏 ...brilliant...simply brilliant 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Priya 🤗 Travis Garland a native Texan I am biased 😆 ...love all his songs perfect choice . Liked the addition of the song to your SS. Please continue would like to see them part ...Khushi ki becheni dekhi would like to see Arnav trying to reach Khushi and Madam not giving in ...hormonal Khushi 😆

Great job sweetheart👏 can't wait jaldi update karo .
Edited by beena14 - 12 years ago

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