SWARON SS: Unpredictable sharon(last part: pg 8)

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aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: spongy
it was actually an unpredictable os... <3 <3
👏👏👏

thank you so much😃

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aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: d3lover90
Really unpredictble..
Would love to read more..
Nyc start,.

thanks dear.. really your comments encourage me a lot...😃

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aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: binuja_
Unpredictable it is... 😊
adamant sharon and confused swayam...
lol i loved the way u showed the tiff between his heart and his intelligent brain... 😛
would love to read further...pm me... 😊

i am glad you liked it... but its always like this.. adamant and confused swaron who love each other but dont express...

and i initially didnt intend to add fun.. but thought to add a little... i am really glad u liked the tift...

i'll try and pm u next time.. though i am not sure... today too i send the pm's but i dont think anyone receivd them..

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flirteyed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey its a realy interesting OS! Plz do update soon! Loved reading d first part :)

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aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: shreyasi28
Hey its a realy interesting OS! Plz do update soon! Loved reading d first part :)

thanx dear..

i am glad u liked it.. and yes i'll update but not sure when..

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Trailblazer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Very well written !! 👏
Confused Swayam...This is so similar to the actuall SwaRon track, coz they are also so unpredictable...Good stuff..Keep going !!😊

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Rohan :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

do update the next chapter soon...

and if possible send me pm tooo

😊

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harshana1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

It was really good, emotional and hot ;) do continue soon!

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Lubna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

that was definitly shocking and suprising, but i also liked how maturely swayam handled sharon...one question...was she drunk???really nice job!!!!!!do write more soon and pm me when you do!!!!!!!!!!