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I'm a bit late to comment .. but better late than never .. awesome SS .. when i read the first 2 parts of the SS, i thought the sharon behavior in swayam's house (before she revealed the reason) was the reason for the title .. but for me what really felt unpredictable was the way she reacted when she got to knw that swayam knows abt the promise .. usually in stories it will be all happy happy n there ends the story but the way you wrote the ending was really something.. the way you showed the swaron's love story is not as simple as it seems, there is always a lot n lot of complications, passion, high intensity n god knows what not in it.. n in the end, even after having all this complications there was hope .. for me that's really swaron ..
Superb work .. pls do pm me when u write ..
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