10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part18
manvi falls on virats cheat and virat puts his one hand on her waist to steady them and they have small eyw lock and then in about 2 3 minutea they come back to there sence and move back
manvi turns round virat and viren looking at manvi quitly
manvi turns to her friends
manvi:daka kis ne diya(who pushed me)
khushi:main nahi heer ne
arohi:heer nai main nahi
manvi walks forward and heer walks backwards
heer scard
manvi:tumne daka diya
heer:.n...na..nahi ...maine nahi mara wo un dono ne mara tha kya tum mujpe vishvas nahi karti sobbing and tears coming out manvi kya maine kabi be tumhe kuch asa kiya ya bol hai jise tum bur lage nahi na to pir
manvi tutns
manvi walking to khushi:khushi mujhe patha tha tune kiya tha
khushi:nahi arohi na kiya
arohi:nahi is ne kiya
they keep fighting
manvi:chup!!
manvi:jis ne kiya is baar mafe kar dethi hu agli bar as math karna
arohi:vese manvi
manvi:kya
arohi:wo queation ka jawab de jo meine room me pucha
manvi rememebers and blushes and looks at virat and looks down
manvi: q batho
arohi:agre nahi batho gi to pir...(thinking)
khushi:hum viratji ko bata denge ke tumne kya kaha unke bare main
manvi:u wouldn't dare
arohi:manvi u no i love dares
viren:kya kaha ta virat ke bare main
virat listens carefully
khushi: yahi ke viratji
manvi:kuch nahi
manvi whispers. to arohi and khushi tume bad mein dekhe ti hu
arohi:q bata du jiju ko ke tujhe wo caring or cute lagte hai
virat hears this and smiles to himself
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
part19
manvi whispersto arohi:q main kabi arjun ji ko kabi kuch bataya jo tune mujhe unke bare main bathay nahi na to tu be mu band ruk
arohi joining hands:tik ha meri ma
manvi smiles and say good girl
heer:challe beeji na bullaya tha
they all go to garden
virat manvi at the end
as they both enter virika runs to them
everyone look at them
virika goea and hugs virat and says
virika:romeo i missed you tum ne bohat dare lagi
virat:hugs her back:i missed u too heer arohi and khushi to manvi:ab sumag aya q tune kaha ke jiju cute hai
virika:juliat our romeo baat ho gayi
jeevika: virika romeo to virat hai lekin ye juliat kon hai
virika:manviji ko mein juliat bulaya q ka agar wo romeo ke saath shaadi karenge to fir romeo ki hi to juliat banenge na
viren:butterfly tum to bohat smart ho gayi ho
virika:pappa ap muje buttetfly nahi bula sakte sirf romeo bula sakta hai or shahid juliat be agar unhe mera romeo pasand aya ho or wo shaadi ke liye man gayi
dadaji:behneji humari taraf se hai ha
beeji:beta manvi tum hi bata do tumhara hai ha ya na
manvi feels shy she looks down
virat looks at manvi
viren:agar hai ya na nahi bolna chati to pir agar hai ha. to butterfly bolo or agar na hai ti virika
manvi looks at virat and says :butterfly and as soon as she said that she look down blushing
dadaji:to phir date fix kar ke hum apko bata denge
beeji:tik hai
vadhera leave



next update will be on thursdays
precape:virman meet again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
plez plez comment and maybe if im not tired tommorow because of doing 4 pages of RE then maybe i continue but only if i get enough comments and thanks for all other comment i got i really appresiate that u like my story bye
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Such cute updates loved em
The wat she talks bout caring n cute virat
N the bump lolz
N then sayin butterfly for yes so sweet
Thanx a lot for the awesone updates
Cnt wait until Thursday bt even I understand RE wrk can be tiring makes u think so hard n u feel lyk energy loss
Bt plz do update quickly then
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
yaarrr very nice and i really liked it plzzz update next prt quickly waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Very nice updates. Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
thank u so much for all updates, all parts are cute, super, awesome, lovely, great updates plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz try to update tomorrow plzz i realy can't wait to read next parts.😃👏👍🏼⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
hey nice concept:D Looks like you are reading a ff of Viren and Jeevika .. hahahaha I can not see Manvi so shy .. but I like it! is something different .. Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update next prt soon plzzz waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love ur story. plzzz
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update it today

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