10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
thanx alot for updating so fast 😊

Awesome update ..
Virman sharmile types bade cute lagte hai
And butterfly is so adorable the way she said manvi juliet :)

Virman eye lock was cute

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Omg ths story is getting rckng and interesting day by day
Plz cnt sn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
plzzz update next prt quickly waiting to knoow what will happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update quickly waiting waiting 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
i am sorry i cant update today cuz i have an inteview tomorroq in a collage and im to wooried about that and if i update now then it wont be as good but tommorow afer interview i will surely update alot am reallly realllyyy reeaallyy sory abot this bye
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: myvirman

<font size="6">i am sorry i cant update today cuz i have an inteview tomorroq in a collage and im to wooried about that and if i update now then it wont be as good but tommorow afer interview i will surely update alot am reallly realllyyy reeaallyy sory abot this bye</font>


Plz do not update I myt sound rude bt seriously I kno hw u feel
I jus had my uni interviews too n I cudnt even sleep at nyt
So plz concentrate on interview first
Only then we will get fab updates
N GUD LUCK for ur interview it'll be ok dnt be too nervous dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
i wil update today maybe it gets late but i will and the reason is that i got the place im soo happpyhow com no one is commenting and this is the only reason i didnt update on wenesday cuz i wasnt getting enough comment but for the people who commented i will update today promis
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Congrats for getting the place
N I'm waitin for ur update too so plz do it today
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
part20
next day
chodary house
all friends were siting in manvis room talking
arohi:manvi maine apni hona wali sasu ma se pucha ke kya tum meri wedding planner ban sakti ko to uno ne ha kaha to plez kya tu meri shaadi ke liya wedding planner ban sakti hai
manvi:q nahi wesa kam shuru kab karna hai
arohi:aj se ma ne kaha tha ke ajj decoration karni hai q k kal sagai hai
manvi:thik hai pir chalo decoration lena chalte hai
they tell beeji and leave for the mall
vadhera house
virat was in the hall doing his work on his laptop
vanshika came by him
vanshika:virat
virat:ji ma
vanshika: beta jo pooja sub hoti hai uske liya pooja ke phool chaiya kya tum market se leaoge plez
virat: ji ma mein abhi jata hu or butterfly ko be leke jatha hu wo apne liye doll lelegi or choclates
virat goes with virika to the mall
virman in same mall
manvi side:chalo phool ke dukan mein pehle chalte hai
arohi:teke hai
virat side
virat:butterfly pehle phool le lete hai pir dolli ok
virika:k
virman go to same shop first manvi enters and is gets flower fir decoration and is paying that is wen virat enters and stands opposite to manvi and arohi khushi and heer
virat:bhaiya kya ap ke pass phool hai jo pooja mein use karte hai
shop keper: mujhe nahi patta konse phool puja mein use karte hai ap hi chosse kar lijiya
meanwhile after they payed money
arohi suddenly turns and sees virat and smiles
arohi:manvi kya tujhe jiju ki yaad a rahi hai
manvi:blushing kya kehrahi ha chup kar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
part21
khushi looks at arohi and she sigjns heer to look at virat as she sees him she also smiles
khushi:nahi manvi agar miss kar rahi hai to bata de hum tujhe abhi jiju se milwa dete hai
manvi looks down blushing
heer:q chira rahi ho isko jiju yaha kaha hai
arohi:heer jiju yahi hai bilkul humare piche
heer and manvi look at each other shocked and turn to virat side
as manvi saw virat her heart beat got faster
manvi thoughts:ye mujhhe kya ho raha hai jub be mein virat ji ko dekti hu meri darkan thez q ho jathi hai
arohi :shoves manvi and says manvi kya huwa ja na bat kar jiju se
manvi:loooking down blushing...n..nahi..mein...nahi ..jaungi
arohi:q chale na
they drag manvi to virat now manvi right behind virat but virat didnt notice
virat:butterfly kya tume patha hai pooja mein konse phool use karte hai jaldi mein maa se puchna bul gaya
virika:romeo mujhe nahi patha sorry and eyes get teary
virat looks at her and hugs her side ways and wipes her tears
virat:meri beautiful butterfly ke ako mein asu ache nahi lage te so plez smile
virika smiles
virika:but romeo phool
virat scrachea his hair:ha uska kya kare ub kaun help karega ub
arohi gets an idea after hearing this
arohi:manvi ja jiju .ko help kar
manvi nervous:..m.mein ..ka.kaise
arohi:tum dono yahi ruko to heer khushi
manvi chal
manvi goes with arohi to virat
arohi:hi jiju
virat turns and smiles at arohi and then looks at manvi and smiles widly and keeps staring
manvi blushing and looking down
arohi smiling
arohi:jiju

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