10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part11
manvi was blushing while others were teasing her
dabbu:manvi di larke wala age aur beeji apko nicha bula rahi hai
manvi heart beat gets faster
heer:chale manvi
they all go down
as virat saw manvi his eyes got glue to her he couldnt look any where else qnd he got some weird feel in his heart he just wanted to star at her for a long time
everyone else looked at virat how his eyes where glued to manvi and they just smiled
heer looks at virat staring at manvi and she smiles and whispears to manvi
heer:manvi dekhe jiju kese dekhe raha ha tujhe unke to nuzre hi tujse nahi hat rahi
manvi quickly looked at virat and there eyes meet they just kept staring wen manvi breaks the eye lock virat was still staring
virat would of kept staring if jeevika didnt cough
dadaji:beta humar pas beto
manvi sits between swamini and dadaji and opposite virat
manvi was talking to dadaji and swamini quitely virat couldnt hear her and he kept looking at her and smiling
manvi was smiling and blushing she looked up for a bit and found virat looking at her she smiles to him he smilea back
suddenly viren says
viren:dadaji kya mein virat jeevika our virika unse kahi our akele me baat kar sakthe hai
beeji:ji q nahi
beeji to manvi: beta une apne saathe chat pe le jao
manvi:she shakes her head
manvu walk and virat and virika after her then viren jevika
at the chat
jeevika with manvi on one set
and virika a v boys on on set
sets opposite so virman facing each other
jeevika:tumhar naam kya hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
update next prt soon wauting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
wow lovely all of the part plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzz plzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update today plzz plzz i can't wait to read next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
part12
manvi is blushing and looking down
viren:bol na kya naam hai
manvi:um..m..manvi
virat smiles. widely after hearing her name
jeevika:bar pyaar naam hai
viren:mujhe be yahi lagta hai
manvi:thank u
manvi looks at viren wen she noticed virika she smiles at her and brings her hand foward
manvi:tumha kya naam hai
virika:virika
mmanvi:ider ao
virika goes and sits in manvis lap
jeevika virat viren shocked
viren: virat
virat:no reply in shock
viren:jeevika
jeevika:no reply in shock
viren:virat!!jeevika!!
viren. jevika:kya!!! come out of shock
manvi looks at them confused
viren:tum dono ne dekha virika pehli bar kisi ke pas jali gayi without getting scard
jeevika:hai pur kya kare manvi ha hi itni achi
manvi to virika:ye dolly buri achi ha kisne di virika had a doll in hand
virika:romeo ne di
manvi:romeo kaun hai
virika:app mujhe niche rak ye pir bathati hu
she puts her down
virika walks to virat and puts her hands forward signing virat to pic her up
virat put her in his lap
virika:ye hai mere romeo or mein inki butterfly but mein hi inhe romeo bula sakti hu or koi nahi
virat:or kisi ko bulan be nahi bunga mein or sirf mera right ha butterfly o butterfly bulan q butterfly
virika:ha
they hug
manvi smiles at there bond she finds it cute
jeevika notices manvi smiling
jeevika:manvi patha ha virika aur virat ki bonding sab se beautiful hai ye dono ek dusre ke beger nahi reh sakte agar virika ko sara se bi chot aye to virat bohat parishan ho jatha hai yaha tak office be nahi jatha.




next update maybe kal ya after tomorrow. bye for now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow super now i can't wait for next update plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update tomorrow plzz plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing prt just can't for next prt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
jst woww 😃
Very interesting and different story
The virika and virat bonding is so cute and adorable.,
And the 4 galz frendship is sweet...

And u write very well and also u update too fast hats off to u for tht 😃
Update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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im totally in love with ur story seriouslyhope they both say yes to marriage u make everythin so cute n im really lukin forward to the nex updatesplz plz plz jaldi update karna plz do it quickly really wanna read nex update quickly quickly😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very very nice updates. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i will update in two hous or tommorow

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