10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice story
continue soon
and plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
wow love the concept to this i hope manvi is virat's dream girl n really cnt wait for virman's meeting hope they get married soon bt i got a feelin it myt nt be love at first sight for them so hw r theyre gonna end up in marriage if they do ...lets see plz do update quickly 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
yes...
do updtae fast😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
part7
manvi:tek hai tum chalo main abhi ayi
manvi turns to arohi: ab rona mut mein abi ayi
she turns to face heer
manvi:heer tujhe to mein bad me dekhti hu ajj bi isa tung kar rahi hai agar phir se asa kuch kiya to.mein tumse bath nahi karung
heer:sorry pur plez as math bol tere siwa mera hey e kaun says this with teary eyes
manvi feels guilty and hugs heer
manvi:sorry qga se asa kuch nahi kahung but plez ab koye nahi roye ga all friends hug
dabbu: di jaldi chaliay
manvi:chalo
manvi leaves
swamini to vadhera family:mujhe wo larke kya naam tha hai manvi virat ke liya pasand hai app ko kya wo pasand hai
vadheras:bohat
daaji: swamini tum arohi sa pucho uska parivaar kaha hai our arohi ko muth batana ki hum manvi ka rishta mangana chahte hai.
swamini:tek hai dadaji
swamini and vanshika go to arohi
arohi heer and khushi were together
vanshika:kaise ho beta
arohi:mein tek hu app kaise hai anty
vanshika:mein tekhe hu
swamini:beta wo larki manvi kaun ti our uska parivaar kaha hai
arohi:anty wo hamari best friend hai wo ek wedding planner hai or uske mamma pappa nahi hai wo apne beeji ke saath rehti hai
vanshika:uski beji kaha hai
arohi:waha
she points at beji
vanshika:acha tumse milke bara acha laga bye
arohi: ap se bi
swamini vansika walk to dadaji
dadaji:kya kaha us ne
vanshika:wedding planner hai uske momma pappa nahi rahe apne beeji ke saath rehti hai waha rahi uski beeji.
dadaji: chalo pir
they walk to beeji as they get there they hear beeji and manvi talking

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
part8
beeji:manvi beta tume yaad hai humne tum kal kuch kaha tha
manvi:kkonse bath beeji
beeji:tumhari shaadi ki
manvi is blushing
manvi:ji
beeji: to hum ne socha hai ke pandit ji se bath kar ke tumhare liya koi larka dunde to agre tumhe bura na lage to...
manvi:kya beeji
beeji:kya tum kam se to din ke liye chute le sakte ho jub ko larka tume dekne ke liya aye
manvi:tek ha beeji jesa ap chaha
khushi: manvi mere saath chal problem ho gayi
manvi :kesi problem
khushi: heer
manvi:kya huwa heer ko
khushi:uske saar me dard hai or dizzy feel be ho rahi hai pur dawi nahi le rahi
manvi:beeji mein abhi ayi
manvi and khushi ran to heer
meanwhile
dadaji:behenji hum apse kuch bath karni hai
beji:ji bolye
dadaji: huma apki poti manvi bohat pasand hai hum apne bete virat ke liya ap ki beti ka hath mangna chaheng ge
beeji:um...buy sab hum chahenge ke manvi pehle larke se aur ap ke parivar se mil le or ager us rishta pasand aya to hum ha kar denge
dadaji:tek he pir hum kal apke ghar athe hai or manvi ko milenge
beeji:tike hai
she gives adress
heer has her medicene wen manvi gives it.
end of function chodiary and arohi only there
beeji:manvi beta tumhara liya ik rishta aya hai
everyone shocked
beeji:kal tum dekhne arahe hai
manvi blushs
beeji: kal tum thino a jana humare ghar
then they go homee


vadhera house
everyone return from the roka they have changed and r sitting in hall talking suddenly door bell rings. servant opens the door and took the bag from virat
virat entered

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
part9
virat entered as soon as virika saw virat she ran up to him while screamming
viirika:romeo age romeo age
virika ran and hugs virat
as virat sees virika hes face lights up he smiles and bends on his kness fir virika to hug him
everyone smile at them
they get out of huge virat goes and freshs up and then comes to the hall where everyone is
dadaji:virat hum ne ek larki dekhe ti ag bari pyaari bache ti to hum ne us ka rishat manga tumhar liye hum rishta pakka kurenge pur pehle tum use pasand karo hume yakin hai tumhe wo bohat pasand ayegi
the went to sleep.
next morning vadhera house
7am virat was sleeping wen virika enters in his room
she comes and sits next to virat
shaking virats shoulder
virika:romeo uto uuto
virat wakes up
virat:kya huwa butterfly
virika:momma ne kaha hai juldi wake up our neche a jaye pir hum larki se milenge
virat smiles and thinks shahid yeh wahi larki ho my dreamgirl
virat gets ready and has breakfast and they leave for manvis house

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6am manvi wakes up and strechs an ten looks at her self in mirror and remember that boy side is comming today she starts blushing and smiling suddenly she gts worried
manvi:(thoughts) kya mein une pasand aungi
suddenly she comes out of her thoughts as the door bell rings
beeji screams
bbeeji:dabbu darwaza kol
mamvi quickly gets ready and goes down she sees all her frriends have came they all go to her
heer:manvi kaise hai
manvi:tik hu
khushi: manvi ajj me tujhe tyaar karungi
arohi:nahe mein karung
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
can u plzzz it's a request update ne t prt too and i really liked this prt also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Superb updates
next update kab milega???
Edited by .jai. - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#39
heya this is sia and my sister is writing this story (My Virman) she said that she isnt able to update as she is a new bie and the website doesnt allow any more updates at the moment but she will try again in a couple of hours
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part10
heer:nahi main
manvi:tum thino hi karna ab khush
all three:ha
thay all laugh
they quickly have breakfast
beeji:manvi tum tyaar ho jao wo kabhi bi a sakte hai
manvi gets nervous
arohi:kya huwa manvi mann mein ladu futtuu raha hai
manvi:um...n...nahi ...to
heer:dekho sharma kese rahi ha abhi to sirf yehi bathaya ke wo a rahe he to itna sharma rahi hai jub milogi to kya hoga
manvi gets shy and runs to her room
manvi gets ready they r waiting for the boy side
suddenly they hear car sound
heer:lagta hai hona wwala jiju a gaye
manvi gets shy and starts smiling
khushi:tekho smile kasa kar rahi hai
arohi:area hato sar jiju ko dekhne to do
all three run to window manvi gets shy so she doesnt want to see virat
vadheras
in car
driver:hum agae
virat viren jeevika and virika in one car rest in other. car
viren:virat chala tumari dulhaniya ko milne
virat smiles and gets out of the car
khushi:yaar ye to do larke hai in mein se dulha konnsa hai
arohi:area wo jo beutiful lady ke saath he wo uska pati hai to i guess dusra wala hogo
khushi:tujhe kese patha
arohi:area yaar kal wo lady or unke husband mera roka pe aye thea
beeji invites the vadhera in and they settle down
virat and jeevika together and virika in between them
virat was look around to see if the girl was any where near
jeevika with smirk:kya dund rahe ho dewaar ji
virat:ku...kuch nahi..
dadaji:behen kya hum larki se milsakte hai
beeji:ji ek minute
beeji:dabu ja larkiyon ko bula la
dabbu:ji bejji
manvi room




next update kal milega sorry for taking a lonnv time or may be i can today bit in half an hour if not then tommorow bye plezz comment

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