10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story

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sweets1126

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

finally u update!!:))

thaank uu!!!!continue sooon!

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manvilover18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

wow lovely update
can't wait to read more.
plzzz plzzz update soon...

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

This was nice..
Bt stopped at wrong place..
Continue soon..

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Huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

such a lovely n cute update

manvi's diary chase very good idea lets see wat virats reaction to that will be cnt wait

plz update soon

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

really cute and sweet story all the updates were really adorable

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Lavanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

So SORRY for replyng after a vry long time!! :( 😭

Update was awesome!

loved it!👏

please update soon some couple of parts together!

please..😛

and update sssooonnn 😳

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AsadZoyaILU

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

i will update on sunday but i would like people to comment more cuz peoplr get about 5 pages of comment and my story dony get that much vomments an plez next time do press like and if i get lots of comments then i will updaye before sunday may be tommorow if i get about 15 update in next 7 hour bye

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Strikhedonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Please please please continue soon dear...

update karo yaar...😭😭😭

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manvilover18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update update...

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AsadZoyaILU

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#180

Part31
As she looked up it was virat
All were shocked to se virat there
Manvi was standing in front of virat with arohi right behind her
Heer and khushi walked straight to arohi and stand on the sides of arohi
Manvi:back to reality. v...vi...vir..virat...ji..app ..yaha
Virat:vo...(cut of by khushi)
Khushi:kya yaar manvi jiju yaha nahi honge to kaha honge yaad ha na tu inhi ke saath party main ja rahi hai ke bulgayi
Manvi:yaad hai
Virman look at each other and smile and have a small eye lock which is broken by arohi
Arohi:wasa jiju mujhe aps manvi ki complain karni hai
As manvi hers this she gets shocked she looks at arohi with wide open eyes
Manvi:kya!tujhe complain karni hai mera bareme likni maina to kuch kiya hi nahi
Khishi:q jute bolrahi ha tune abi to isa darya ta na ye keh k k tu arohi wala jiju sa compplain karegi
Manvi:viratji maine asa kiya lekin...
Arohi:while walking to virat and holding his arm dekha jiju hud keh rahi hai
Manvi:while walking to virat and moving arohis hand she says lekin mera pas waja ti yeh mujhe meri diary wapas nahi de rahi ti isliya
Virat smiles when manvi moves arohis hand and holds his arm
Virat:puts his palm on her cheek mujhe patha hai u dont need to say anything maina sab dekha
As manvi feels virats soft hand on her cheek she blushes and looks down
Arohi:ahem ahem hum abi
be yahi ha manvi or jiju
Virman moves away
Virat holds manvis from the sholder
Manvi looks at virat and he looks at her and smiles and she smilez back while blushinh
Virat:to kya huwa sali sayiba humari shadi hona wali hai hum jub chahe tub hathe pakar sakte hai because we got the right
As manvi hears this she starts blushing
Arohi:dont worry jiju hum kuch nahi kahenge
Heer:arohi ab hume chalna chahiya. HAK: Bye ji ju bye manvi
Heer goes and hugs manvi
Heer while huging: manvi im going to miss u
Manvi pulls her out of the hug and sees tears
Manvi gets worryed:heer kya huwa q ro rahi hai
Heer:kuch nahi bus i will miss u so jaldi ana
Manvi: heer is mein rona wali kya baat hai (wiping heer tears)
Main humesha ke liya tori ja rahi hu bus u gayi or u ayi son't worry
Heer: i no but firbi jub tu shaadi kar ke jali jayegi to mein kya karungi mujhe to teri bohat yaad ayegi and hugs her again
Manvi while tears comeing out: asa hai to pir mein kahi nahi jaungi tik hai
Heer move back and starts laughing
Manvi:kya huwa
Virat side hugea manvi:area asa kasa nahi jayengi agar yah se nahi jeyengi to pir mera ghar kasa ayengi
Manvi looks at virat hu looks sad
Manvi smiles
Heer:agar asi baat hai to pir jiju maina apko meri manvi di pur uske liya ap ko ek kame karna hoga
Virat:smiles and.says q karna hoga sali ji
Heer:apko (moves virats hand of manvis shoulder) manvi sa dur rehna hoga jub tak shaadi nahi hoti
Virat makes a shoocked face:shouts kya! Main asa nahi kar ssakta
All girls start laughing and manvi starts blushing
Heer:just joking apko meri manvi ka bohat hayal rakna hoga jo mujhe patha hao ap rrakenge so i don't need to worry
Virat moves to heer and hugs her :dont worry wo.main rakunga
Heer:hugs back and says thanks jiju
Virat:but heer tum udaas mat ho mein manviji ko yaha tumse milne saror launga k so no rona
Manvi smiles at the way virat and heer are talking
Heer comea out of hug
Ok manvi or mera world best jiju hum ab chalte hai bye
All three leave and virat turns to a smiling manvi hu has tears in her eyes
Virat gets worried:kya huwa manvi ji
Manvi:thank u virat ji
Virat:kiss kke liya
Manvi:heer ka mood tik karne ke liya or use khush karne ke liya thank u and manvi huges him while getting emotional
Virats shocked at first but hugs back and smiles
Virat:its k and he kisses on her forhead
They stay in the huge for two three minutes but then manvi comes back to her sense and moves back
Manvi/: wo...wo..i...i'm...s..sorry..wo...galti..sa(not looking at him)
Virat:its...k ...chale
Manvi nods andas they start walking virat and manvi smiles to thm self remembering there cute hug
As they are walking to the car they steal glances of each other every now and then

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