Chasing Dreams Thd3- Chp23 Pg102, Thd 4 Link Pg141 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats !!!!
loved the update

I don't think the date was a disaster...I am happy they both stuck to their beliefs ! only this was fair

I have been reading this story for quite some time

I won't ask for pms cause efficient enough to stalk the works I like
but would be happy if you accept the buddy request
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Posted: 12 years ago

Yeah the first date didn't go according to the expectations at all. But this had to happen.

NKay is just trying to lessen the burden and making it a li'l easy for everyone.

The part after the date ends is written so nicely. Very emotional!

That part before Arnav drops Khushi is written so awesomely. Loved it!

I would like to read how this moves forward... Can't wait to read more!😊

Yeah, this is why the FF deserves to be under the spotlight! Congratulations once again!

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Posted: 12 years ago
very interesting and emotional update, loved the way khushi stood for her moral values and made him understand what she thinks about marriage, both expressed their thoughts very clearly, now anji payal going to play cupid because anji understands her bro more than himself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
As always, a superb update.

I loved these words,
"He looked dangerously sexy in casuals".😃

Feel a little bad that their date didn't go out well,but I admire them both
for being firm on their opinions.And the way they were unhappy that they won't
be taking their relationship further ,they definitely like each other very,very much.

Waiting for the next update to find out what is Anjali's plan.

Loving this story.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update..well v knw wat arnav thnks..i knw both has their reasons but i thnk arnav shud try..he will get khushi with himself forever..wel i dnt knw wat will hapen next..waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats for FF being in spotlight
Awesome update and touching one too . I am glad that khushi always believed in marriage and made herself clear in her point to arnav in fact she is correct in her place ..when there is no name or existence for any relation what is the need to continue that relation.

I wish Arnav understand her beliefs , if he had understood that then khushi wouldn't be heartbroken leaving arnav shattered . cant wait to see anjali's plan with payal . i am eager to see the sparks when they meet everytime for work as they work in same office
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh mi god successfully their first date turned in to breakup 😭 Al thanks to u im Stil confused how can tis strong headed confidant Kushi goes till abortion 😉 Do update NXt part soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
The date might not have been wonderful...but the update certainly was. I wouldn't have wanted either to budge from their stance .

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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats for d spotlight. This FF deserves it.
For d updt
yes , i had hoped some romantic moments in it, silly me:p
but it was good that they cleared all d things bet them. I really loved how arnav cleared his side wid no false hopes and lies although he was so wishing to b wid khushi.
On the other hand is khushi who stood up for her morals and beliefs that she let go of dfuture relationship.
What disturbed me was khushi initiating d kiss once again,kiss in london by her was not that shocking but this as she was more of letting go of relationship,
i fells she is giving wrong signals to arnav and wl b giving in future too not controlling herself and kowing how arnav is ,he still didn do anything wrong as yet.

Again last line of d prolouge made me wonder who might hv started it. I hope its not khushi.

P.S.- y do u alwaysspell ''kushi'' not ''khushi''?:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a beautiful beautiful update!!!!! And what was that about the date being a disaster it was anything but that. Sure things did not go the way everyone wanted it to be but the whole conversation, the way both of them were clear about what they want and their mature reactions to the others views was very well written.
The ride back to Khushi's apartment, the kiss and the hope that the other might change their decision was very sad.
It is so hard to let go something so special and rare willingly. And how both of them are hoping to get over it but we all know that will not be possible.
Now let's wait to see what Anjali does to make the situation better. All hopes are on her now.
Congrats for being the FF in the Spotlight!!!!! You truly deserve this.

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