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citi

@citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Stalemate. Neither one of them is wrong in their place. Though I feel that you can't explore a relationship with the guarantee of marriage to follow...it's unrealistic but then neither can it be easy to go in for one where marriage is not a possibility at all. A Catch 22 situation is what this is.

Their emotions and disappointment is expressed well.

Congratulations for being the FF in Spotlight

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jisa

@jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

really...never thought that things will turn out like this...
w8ng for next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

I loved today's chapter!

Although i want them to unite, but not at the cost of one's, specially khushi's values and morals. But i was kind of thinking that, khushi might give in and surrender because of her love.

But that didn't happen. I highly admire this Khushi! It was not easy for a girl of her age and of her type to let it go like this, knowing how much arnav means to her. yet she did it!

Anjali would now try something, thats good. but again i don't want her to bend khushi just because she can't do that with arnav.

This is absolutely a tensed situation. But all these reminds me of the excerpt! I hate seeing her in that situation at the doctor's chamber!

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Actually the first date was not a disaster for me. They were there to talk and they did that like two adult and mature people. Now they both knows where they stands and made a healthy decision, but how long that will last we dont know!
Iam happy that Arnav didn't push Khushi to change her decision. Whatever Arnav was talking about relationship and him being a loyal to his partner and so on was completely ok, but then why no marriage? Why is he against marriage when he
Is ready to give everthing to a relationship? It was Hart breaking for both of them.its sad because they are nice people. What us Anjali going to do now?
Thank you for wonderful and long update.

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simran

@crazymg.04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Hey congrats for being the spotlight FF of the week..truly Well deserved!!!!!

the update was depressing...but khushi took a stand though difficult but fair indeed.Arnav needs to realize a lot of things and khushi particularly.Anjali i hope acts cupid and brings them back which shall be interesting to read.

The kiss was too good and something appealing😳 to us in the midst of such a sad update

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Nver evr have i been this apprehensive about an ff" but this one surely amazing!

If either of them wud have bowed sown to their beliefs just for the sake of sayin. I wud have been diappointed! But i like it that both Arnav and khushi hold a firm ground on this issue..

I liked where it started frm.. NK is totally justified, so is Arnav on that matter.. Than their date started of well..
But YE TO HONA HII THA!

One thing a person shud hold on to is his/her beliefs.. Thngs change but not instantly! Both of them are right!

Although as a sister Anjali may try hard to bring them up, may succed even, but i wish she doesn't interfere.. Let both of them realise themselves! So that if they enter into a relationship, let the bargain be equal on both sides!

Anywys waiting for the nxt update:)

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Jay

@Sharaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

FF Spotlight... Heartfelt Congrts NB...

You deserve it...

This FF is gettin into marvellous pace gradually...

I simply love it...

The Date is much unique with Arshi flavour in emotions...

Wow, u jus penned it well...of course, typed it well...

They r much matured nd concerning & respecting each other...

Marriage...This single word has extreme opposite beliefs in arshi..

I love their inner turmoil whenevr they go trough this...

loved Payash & Anju, comforting them &give thier time to come up...

Street kiss,Garden kiss & Car kiss...damn it...

How come u r giving such wonderful emotional kisses along with song in each Arshi update dear...

May i expect more emo kiss forthcoming chap...

pls bring it up soon ...i cant wait for their next convo in privy...

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Smriti

@serialjunkie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

your kushi is a smart girl. she spoke her mind and stood by her ideals. now where this leads no one knows. perhaps in the course of time arnav will realize a marriage is not a death knell and khushi will realize a paper does not define a relationship. imagine them turning the tables on each other?

story flow is awesome K, it goes smooth and easy with every sentence paragraph. i am thoroughly enjoying it and only wish my next quarter does not begin too soon denying me the pelaseru of reading this story to completion.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Mubarak for being in the Spotlight, well deserved.

The chapter is written so beautifully, the emotions came out very well. Khushi is clear as to what she wants. Even though she likes him so much yet her values and principles take priority which i really like. The car scene was so natural. Hope Anjali and Payal can play a role in bringing them together. Though i feel Arnav is right in his own way, if you don't believe in something then there is no point in doing it.