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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

I am glad you are watching Family guy because I don't know what it takes to write something so sad - it is almost depressing. I am hoping there is a silver lining in there and after shedding all the misery, they will come up for air and notice the sun shining brilliantly on them. I like Suman as I will del with things the same way but like she says, not everyone is similar and this couple is anything from the regular people we meet. I also like La, she is so real and acts so normally. It is refreshing. So there is hope for Payal but what about La? Can an NK make an appearance for her?

Your writing is so gripping that no matter how depressing this story is, I can't stay away from it. Thank you!

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Arani_Kumar

@Arani_Kumar

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Thanks for the pm.liked the update. I think its good khushi is going thru these turmoils because it will give her a glimpse into what everybody that loved and cared for her went thru in the past 7 years not knowing where or how she was.

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Vins.ICT

@Vins.ICT

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

heyy...

this ff is unique not to mention your words...

wow... i sometimes have to pull out the dictionary...

as for the story... AMAZING... the anguish... the pain... the hope... every damn emotion is so pronounced... as if it's we who are feeling it...!!!

i think i could connect to a great extent with khushi... and though she's blamed and rightly so to some part... but her emotions too are something to grieve for...

as for the 3 months arnav has been away... i think khushi should just wait for him given the fact that she's made him suffer for 7 years...

well seeing both if them happy together is far away right now... but m looking forward to that whenever it comes... especially how you write that out...

do pm me your next update...

p.s. m vinita btw..!

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

nice part...

waiting for sumthing whose result may not be in ur favor is really painful...its like hanging to a roop in a deep valley with the fear of fall...

lets see wht u hav in store...

thnks for the PM...

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

such a heart wrenching update dear...
awsm
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thnxxx 4 da pm...

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simran

@crazymg.04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

"I am not sure if he would want me anymore." Khushi closed her eyes and collapsed on the chair, her deepest fear finally transitioning to words of woe

the entire crux of Khushi worry,her pain lies in these lines...she fears Arnav will not want her anymore...that he will come back a different person...its true distance might create love but sometimes gives us a number of reasons too to contemplate whether he/she is the one we want...love is enveloped with barriers and insecurities afterall...feel sad for her but can understand Arnav's POV as well.

Very well written👏

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

arnav is being a man who is going through an emotional turmoil but still keeping it aside for his work...am loving thay fact😊

don t know when they ll be able to meet and be on the same page with same terms *sigh*

awesome update 👏

update the next soon dear😃

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

I am not sure Khushi is being fair; she took 7 long years to come to terms with life and cannot allow Arnav to take a call on his. She has some means to contact him i.e. through Suman, he had none. He has been more than decent about her sudden return, she should return the courtesy.

Khushi you made your bed, learn to sleep on it.

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Hey!

Thanks for the PM.

Once again, well-written.

Very well described 😃😃😃

Quite a bit of an emotional update this was.

I feel for Khushi ... a tricky situation really. Nor can one blame her nor Arnav ... sometimes feelings and emotions get the better of us.

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

I feel for Khushi, but she should understand. She left for years, without an intent to come back. Arnav has only been gone for a few months and he's made it clear to her that he's going to come back.

I'm really curious to see what Arnav has been doing during this time away. Is he still with Akash? Is he still in a lot of pain? Can't wait to read more!