ARIYA SS MY COMPLAN...UPDT LAST PART PG20,21 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Hi !!
I am back with my bakwas.

Part 6
at hospital
(introducing 1 new charecter,junior dr.mrinalini mukharjee(in short lini),3years younger sis of riya)
doc:mrs.rawte,aapko apna zyada khayal rakhna hoga.apke uss hadse ki wajese apko abhi bhi kamzori hai.zyada fruits,healthy food khana hoga.
Arjun:suna,doctor ne kya kaha?doc,main inhe bol bol ke thak gaya hu...yeh sunti hi nahi hai meri baat.aur...
Riya:are,doc,aap toh janti hai nah iss halat me khana thik se khaya nahi jata...jabbhi sochti hu ki aaj achchhe se khaungi,sab ulti ho jata hai.aur yeh arjun ko samajh nahi ata.
Doc:yah!u r right.par apko jab bhi khane ka man karega tab aapko khana parega.waise ghar pe apke sath kaun rahete hai?
Riya:aap ke wajese main aur 2 months tak office ja sakti hu.baki time mere sath meri chhoti bahen lini rahti hai.
Doc:u mean mrinalini.she is a very good doctor.toh phir mr.rawte apko toh phikar karne ki bilkul zaroorat nahi.ok,reports agai hai.sab normal hai.take care.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6
cotinue
they left the doc's room.
Lini: (nourvously)are,dids!tum kab ayi?mujhe bataya nahi ki tum arahi?(suddenly pichhe se)
man:are mrinu?yaha ruk kyun gayi?chalo...
Lini:woh...main...mera matlab yeh meri dids,mera matlab meri bari bahen.
Man:woh...achchha.main hu dr.karan,karan malhotra.
Riya:woh,achchha,nice to meet u.waise senior ya junior?
Lini:mujhse 2years senior hai.
Riya:nahi,main toh ye puchrahi thi ki tumhar senior doctor hai ya junior?
Lini:woh...senior.
Riya:tum toh kahi jarahi thi nah?
Lini:nahi,dids,tum bolo nah kya bolna hai?
Riya:nahi,aab tum jao.ghar ake baat karenge.

Aaj itna hi.pm late hoga.comments plz karna.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
nice...but inna chota update???? not fair...
continue soon...
thanks 4 pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice one..
Bth y shrt update ..
Thx for pm..
Continue soon :)
Posted: 12 years ago
#35
The updates were nice but short.
Do continue soon with long updates.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
great update :) loved it
oh so riya has sister :) nice
the update was too short
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Sorry fr short updts.actually main mere mom ke mobile se updts de rahi hu.zyada likhne se unglio me dard hota hai u know nah!!next updt p.c.dungi,tab long update milega. Thanx fr ur comments.par mera dil nahi bhara.aur chahiye...
Edited by pankhuri96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Read all story from one to go...
realy amazing story..
first when riya ask for some to lift..
ohh it was nonother then arjun...
ohh god he is her husband ..
very nice..
Lv ariya romence..
that was so cute n romentic lvd it...
ohhh sam father ban gaya..
lvd its..
ariya gona be patents soon..supub exciting...
update soon..
all parts r grate panku..
next time send me link...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Nice one and loved Ar mrinalini
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Hey ...
Nice part ...
But very short ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...

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