ARIYA SS MY COMPLAN...UPDT LAST PART PG20,21 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
here is the next part:
part 3

sunrays hits on riya's face.slowly she open her eyes.sees that her husband sleeps peacefully.she tries to left bed,but one hand stops her.
riya:toh aap jage hue hai???chhoriye,mujhe jane dijiye...dijiyeee...
arjun:kya,sweetu...aaj bhi mujhe chhor ke jane kaa maan kar raha hai?????aao naaa...passs..aao aur ek session ho jaye...
riya:aaap bhi nah...chaliye uthiye...
arjun:ek hi shart peee...ki hum ek sath bath...
riya:nahiii...aap bahat noughty ho gaye hai aaj kal..

then they got freshen up,but separately.😉😉then they set off for etf.
in etf::
shree:aare wah!!yeh khaduss abhi tak nahi aaya???lagta hai riya ko bahat dant pari...
chotu:aare,riya toh kaal akele hi nikal gayi thi...

suddenly they saw mr. & mrs. rawte.(u understand nah!!!)they looked very happy.often riya is blushing.
shree:(in mind)aare...inhe dekh kar nahi lagta ki inke bich kuchh hua hai...pata kar na parega...

but shree failed.ussne bahat koshis ki janne ki but,but,but koi faida nahi hua.hamare acp thodi na batayenge...

after 1 week

rathore:aaj koi naya case nahi hai,(shree & chotu make happy faces)but hame pending kaam khtam karna paregaa.

shree and chotu left.

arjun:saam,sonali kaisi hai???
saam:woh toh thik hai,par usske ninth months chal rahe hai.
arjun:toh tum chhutti kyun nahi lete???
saam:nahi yaar...maasa hai ghar pe.issiliye toh main befiikar hu.

suddenly a office member saam ko ek call transfer karta hai.

saam:kya???maa,aap ambulance bulao,haam abhi pahuchte hai...
arjun:kya hua???
saam:woh sona ko labur pain shuru hua hai...maasa usse hospital me leke ja rahi hai.hame jldhi pahanchna hoga...

all etf team member goes there.

in hospial::

maasa:saamer tu agaya..usse ot me leke gaye hai...tu chinta maat kar...saab kuch thik ho jayega...
saam:ha,ha main janta hu.kuchh nahi hoga,sona ko...

o.t. ka light off ho jata hai...all got tanced.

doctor:congratulation!!!mr. rathore aapko beta hua hai!!!!!
saam:ohh!!!realy!!!par sonali kaisi hai????
doc:woh thik hai...par abhi bhi behosh hai,unhe cabin me shift kar diya jayega,tab aap mil lena.
saam:ok.
arjun:chal,yaar,mithai toh khila?????aare main chacha ban gaya?????
at the same time riya goes to congratulate him,suddenly feels some dizziness.she fell down.
arjun:riya??????

what will happen next????????wait and watch.aur itne kaam commentsss????dekho agar comments nehi mile toh achha nahi hoga!!!main mazak kar rahi hu...😛😛kuchh toh likhho...i am waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Nice part dear but you didn't pm me:( . But loved the whole part . Waiting for next :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
superb update :) loved it
ariya scenes were so romantic
awww sonali gave birth to a boy :)
and omg riya fainted
thanks for the pm
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
#14
That was an amazing part for the story, loved Arjun and his ways to love Riya.
Meri taraf se bhi Rathore ko congratulations!
Ab Riya ko kiya hua?
Continue soon and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Hey .
Great story ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice part dear..
Rathore ka beta hua.. :)
continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
hi!! here is the next part.i am very happy to see ur comments.par mera bakwas phir se jhelna parega.

PART 4

arjun:riya!!!riya!!kya hua???doctor??doctor??
doc:kya hua??
arjun:dekhiye nah,meri wife ko kya hua???
doc:chinta maat kijiye,hum dekhte hai.

doc riya ko lekar andar jati hai.arjun bahat tension pe hota hai.suddenly doc calls arjun.

doc:mr. rawte,andar ayie.
arjun:kya hua riya ko???
doc:kafi gambhir baat hai.aapko usska bahat khayal rakhna hoga.usska pahele koi accident hu tha???
arjun:kya??ha,ha,hua tha.ek terrorist attack se desh ko bachane ke liye khud ek bacteria ball khud hi khaliya tha.kya hua hai doctor????
doc:usski kamzori abhi bhi hai.issiliye aur bhi khayal rakhna hoga.
arjun:kya hua doc saaf saaf kahiye?????
doc:itna tension maat lijiye.khabar achchhi hai.AAP PITA BANNE WALE HAI!!!!
arjun:kya???aap sach kahe rahe hai???main...papa...riya...kaha hai???
doc:woh andar hai.abhi bulati hu.aur ha...usse abhi tak nahi pata,aap bata dijiye ga.
arjun:ok,sure.

riya comes.
riya:arjun,mujhe kya hua tha???aap muskura kyun rahe hai??? bataiye nah???
arjun:riya...riya...i am sooo... happy...TUM MAA BANNE WALI HO...
riya:sach???main...maa...i can't beliv it!!!!
arjun:toh beliv karo...main sam ko bata ke atta hu.
ria:main bhi aap ke sath chalungi.mujhe baby ko dekhna hai.
arjun:ok,chalo...baba...

they goes to sonali's room.

saam:kya hua arjun??riya thik toh hai nah???
sona:kyun??ria ko kya hua??
arjun:woh...kya hai nah tum dono ki double promotion hone wali hai.
both:double promotion????
arjun:ha,kyun ki...riya maa banne wali hai!!!
sona:kya??sach me??
saam:yeh toh bahat achchhi baat hai!!
riya:but mujhe kuchh kahena hai.baby kaa maan kya rakhna hai???
saam:woh toh socha hi nahi!! 2 mahine baad namkaran ka program hoga taab .
sona:par abhi kuchh toh nam chahiye nah??
arjun:toh...sonu kaisa rahega???
saam:nahi,nahi..
sona:nahi,sonu achchha hai.yehi hoga.hamara sonu...

baas itna???? maat kahena,kyun ki abhi bakwaas baki hai...
Edited by pankhuri96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
after few weeks
ETF
saam:yeh kya hai???
arjun:riya ka resignation.
saam:kyun???aab kya hua?
arjun:main nahi chahta ki riya iss halat me kaam kare.
shree:rii ko kya hua hai,sir?????
chotu:ha,sir,kya hua hai???
saam:abhi tak in saab ko nahi bataya???would be papa???
arjun:woh...
suddenly riya comes
ria:ha,maine hi mana kiya tha.kyun ki mujhe special tarrike se batana tha.par aap logone saab garbar kar di.
arjun:dekho gussa maat karo.i m sorry.
shree:kya hua????
riya:yeh!!lo!!inta sab kuchh ho gaya...inhe samajh hi nahi aya.duffar!!!tu mama banne wala hai???
shree:yeh tu kya kah rahi hai???meri di phirse...
riya:buddhu!!!parna di nahi...main...main pregnant hu.samjhe ya...
shreetu:wah??hamari toh promotion hone wali hai!!!!
ria:par aap se gussa hu,arjun.aap ne mera resignation abhi kyun diya???mera abhi sirf 4 weeks chal raha hai.doc ne kaha hai ki main 5 th month tak kaam kar sakti hu.aur usske baad modernity leave le loongi.resignation!!!no way!!!!
arjun:ok,baba,thik hai.par sirf paper work karna parega.no field work.samjhi ya...
ria:mujhe samjhane ki zaroorat nahi,aap samajh jaye toh hi hoga.

no precap.kaisa laga???plzzz batana...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
for part 4
it's awesome so riya is pregnant and sonali ko beta hua
do khush khabri ek saath kya baat hai
for part 5
ek dum mast part hai re woh har waar yeh dialog aata hai "samjhe ya samjao"

yay i am the first to comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
great update :) loved it
awww riya is pregnant
ariya are just so adorable
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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