ARIYA SS MY COMPLAN...UPDT LAST PART PG20,21 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
nice...
lini ne muh khol diya...
ariya scene was cute...
continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
hi piyal🤗... sorry for late cmnt😳😳...but ariya was beautifull ...nice update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

PART 8

arjun cupps her face and bent down and kiss her softly...after some time they break the kiss...

ria:aap bhi nah!!

arj:kya...waise mujhe chocolate bahat pasand hai...once more...

ria:no...baki ka main akele khaungi...

arj:aab ghar chale...subha hone me zyada waqt nahi hai...kal mujhe office bhi toh jana hai...

ria:yah!!let's go...

next morning:::

arj:riyu...utho...baby...subha ke 8 baj rahe hai...

ria:ha...bas...5 min...

arj:nahi...utho...mujhe ETF jana hai...bahat important case hai...plz...sona...

ria:ha..ha...yeh lo...uth gayi...

arj:ok...jao jake fresh hoke aao...mujhe der ho rahi hai...

ria:ok...(make a puppy face)

ria got fresh n up...they ate breakfast together...then

arj:ria...now give me...

ria:what??ohh!! i understand...

ria gives him a cute kiss on his lips...and say"good morning jaanu"

arj:same 2 u...ok...main abhi chalta hu...

ria gives him a angry look...

arj:ok..sorry baba...main jake ata hu...

ria:ok...bt aapne toh baby ko bye hi nahi bola???

arj:uff!!bye baby...apni mom ka khayal rakhna...


arjun leaves...

ria:pata nahi aaj mujhe kuchh ajib sa lag raha hai...ok...dugga dugga(she prayers for arjun in bengali)


suddenly lini comes out from her room

lini:kya???per meri toh aaj chhutti hai nah???main nahi aa sakti...meri dids ghar pe akeli hai...karan par...main tumhe thori der baad call karti hu...

ria:kya hua??

lini:woh ek emergency hai...hospital me koi heart specialist available nahi hai...karan ke alawa...unhe assist karne jana hai...per maine mana kar diya...

ria:nahi...tu jayegi...kisika zindegi ka sawal hai...tu abhi ja...main bilkool thik hu...tu jaa..

lini:per jij ne toh kaha tha...

ria:tu abhi ja...main hu nah??

lini:apna dhayn rakhna...

ria:ok...meri dadi amma...


lini leaves...

ria:uff!!!aab main akele kya karroo????t.v. dekhti hu...


after 1 hour...

ria:kuch kha leti hu...uff!!ahhh!!!!ahh!!!ohh!!!AAHHH!!!!!! uff!!ohhh!!!mujhe yeh labor pain abhi hona tha????ahhh!!!!AHH!!!main arjun ko call karti hu...uff!!!ahh!!!

bt his cell was not reachable...

ria:ohh!!!ahh!!!aab kya karoo???AAAGHHH!!!!!!!mujhe khud hi jana hoga...ahhh!!!!!AAAHHH!!!!!

she takes the car keys...seats on diver's seat...

ria:aaa!!!!!baby...bas kuchh der aur...thora wait karo...aaahhh!!!aaashhh!!!arjun!!!!!!arjun!!!!!

she starts the car...and leaves...

ria car chalate chalate zor zor se chikh rahi thi...awaz bahar na jaye issi liye ussne sari windows ke sishe uppar utha diye...after 20 mins drive she reached to the hospital...she came out...(WHAT A STRONG GIRL!!!! UUPPS!!! WOULD BE MUMMY)

ria: excused me...plz aap car park kar denge???aaahhh!!!!ohhh!!!!aaa!!!!aare keys car me hi hai...aapko dikh nahi raha ki mujhe labor pain ho raha hai????

the word boy was shocked...and say:ok...mam...

ria:suniye...mujhe labor pain ho raha hai...doc ko bulaiye...plzzz...aaahhh!!!!aaahhh!!!!

sister:ok...mam...aap dr. mrinalini ki sister hai nah????

ria:ha...aahhh!!!ahhh!!!

sis:doc doc kirti????

doc:ha...kya hua???

sis:woh...mrs. rawte ayi hai...unhe labor pain ho raha hai...

doc:toh unke sath jio aye hai unhe formalities pure karne ko kaho...mrs. rawte ko admit karo...

sis:woh akele ayi hai...

doc:kya???akele???woh bhi iss halaat me...doc mrinalini ko bulao...


at the same time

lini was passing by the reception

lini:dids???dids??aap yaha????ohh!! god labor pain????

ria:mujhse aab aur wait nahi hota???aaahhh!!!aaa!!!!!

two word boys come...and take ria to OT...

lini:jiju ko call karti hu???

she dials...

HERE IN ETF:

arjun:yeh kya...riu ke itne calls...

suddenly he saw lini's name flashes on the screen...

arj:ha...chhoti...kya????kab???main abhi ata hu...

sam:kya hua???

arj:ria...hospital...chalo...

sam:don't panic...


full etf reach to the hospital...

in front of OT

arj:yeh kab hua???

lini:pata nahi...yaha ek emerjency thi...issiliye main yaha chali ayi...usski baad hi sayad di ko pain shuru hua haga...

arj:tumhe mujhe inform karna chahiye tha nah???kitni laparwa ho tum...per ria yaha ayi kaise...

wordboy:woh...yeh mam...apni car leke ayi thi..yeh rahi isski chabi...maine park kar di hai...maine in 15 saalo me yesa kabhi nahi dekha...aapki wife ki himmat ki dar deni paregi...kafi strong hai...

arj:thaknx...bt aabhi tak kuchh khabar kyun nahi aya????

lini:aap shant ho jao...sab kuchh thik hoga...


that time the OT's light goes off...

doc:congratulations!!! mr. rawte aap papa ban gaye...apko beti hui hai...

arj:ohh!!!thanx...doc bt ria???ria thik toh hai nah???

doc:ha...thik hai...baapre????pain me car chalake ana...amezing...unhe thodi weakness hai...hum unhe cabin me shift kar denge tab mill lena...

doc gives the little angel to her papa...

arj:ohh!!!my little princess...bilkool meri riu jaisi...


in ria's cabin

ria gains conscious...

arju:riu...

ria:haa...

arj:main jeet gaya...

ria:little princess...thanx arjun...

arj:thanx toh mujhe kahena chahiye...thanx ria...

sam:are...tum dono ka yeh thanx kahena bandh ho toh hum bhi mile little princess aur usske mumma se...kaisi ho???

ria:thik hu...

shree:per kya hum isse little pricess hi bulayenge????

liza:uff!!specky!!duffer...naam toh hoga...toh ria????kya naam socha???

ria:naam...ha...arjun ka A aur riya yani...

arj:yani ARIYA???

ria:ha...

arj:yeh meri diary me thi...tumhe kaise pata...

ria:woh maine dekh liya tha...

sam:toh aajse little princess ka naam hoga MISS ARIYA SURYAKANT RAWTE...


nahi dosto...yahi per end nahi hai...aur bhi hai...itni jaldi pichha nahi chhorungi...comments zaroor karna


Edited by pankhuri96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: life93

hi piyal🤗... sorry for late cmnt😳😳...but ariya was beautifull ...nice update soon

thanx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
amazing update :) loved it
ariya morning scenes were adorable :)
love the way riya wished him good morning :)
awww poor riya had to go to hospital alone in that condition
riya is really so strong
awww ariya became parents of a cute baby girl :)
and they named her ariya :) how cute
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Awww so sweet,and ariya name was perfect
wow driving in labour pain was quiet brave
thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Fantastic part ...
Loved it ...
I salute Riya for her bravery ...
Great work ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...
Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Awesome and fantastic.
Loved it.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Awwwsssmmm...
woowww riya sooo breave
awww ariya sooo cute
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi piyal🤗...awesome part👏👏👏👏...riya is sooo daring👏👏👏...she drove the car herself👏👏👏...so ariya😃😃😃😃😃...is really cute...n shree n liza convo was too cute😃😃😃...update soon

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