ArHi FF: Checkmate Epilogue thread (12th mar upd) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I went through this incredible story over a period of a little more than 24 hrs and that says how arresting the plot and narration have been. It is a very difficult story to conceive and deliver and you have done it with commendable effort. Until certain point, Shyam was having more importance and role in the story than arnav. I felt a little sad at the end of Shyam, that fellow did deserve a poetic justice. Sid was adorable. Khushi was convincing and the fact that she was able to relate to the impossibly selfless gayathri was because she herself was as selfless a person. From Shyam's identity revelation until his death, every passing update made me suspect ashok, and the poor guy ended up having very little role. That was probably the highlight of this FF, I could never trust anyone except arnav and khushi until the penultimate chapter. I had a doubt on even Akash. Finally, I haven't read any thriller this racy in the recent times. Great job.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Wow brilliant ending.
nw wat arush n sana married aft sum years n la n sid r related 2 d raizada???
it wuld b so nce .
arush peckin on lip of sana hahaha... 2 cute.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
truly an awesome ARHI FF. will make a wonderful bollywood movie and would love to see barun and sanaya play Arnav and Khushi😉 u r an amazing writer...thanks for the FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
i am going to miss this heavenly !!

But thought was expected to arhi have another bady and the naming and all !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am going to miss it :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
sorry for late comments dear...

for last part...75...

the story of gayatri is quite painful...it looks like argim's decision oh hasty marriage plus subhadra's unwillingness to accept her has taken a toll over her...and she has faced soo much...with his brother's betrayal and distance frm her son...its just too much...
and finally arnav after their convo. with khushi find a new angle to see their relation with gayatri...
she was never the one at fault but suffered the most...i wish they accept dhruv whole-heartily...
so little arush working on bridging the gap of family with mother son duo...
it create a nice happy family at last
it was a perfect ending...
loved it...
thnks for PM...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
sorry for late comments...

but m gonna miss this FF a lot...

gr8...5 years leap...little babies are grown up...
so anjali has a little daughter...her name is different...nice name...
poor arnav...he so wanted to be with a preg. khushi...her mood swings are totally P off...
nice to read abt the bond of khushi and dhruv...it may be dhruv has only been with his mama so he was lonaly types but khushi knows how to put the peace into chaos...so dhruv is too not remain unaffected with it...
awww...little arush has already chooses his girlfriend...pura baap ka asar hai...😆😆...
nice description for a happy family...
fantastic...
thnks for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww i ll miss this one really ...
What a beautiful ending to the story... Sid's daughter will be Arnav's DIL.. 😆 Arush is typical like his father ...
Thank you for such a lovely story ... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The epilogue brought all the scattered family together, their running and hiding games are finally over, and they all manage to come out it wonderfully. They are a family now!

Loved the story, your secrets and mystery always left me breathless, and I loved every second of it!

It's hard saying goodbye to a story, but it surely ran its course. Will miss this story! :)
Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Lovely!!!!

It was great experiance being with this story...
Loved the epilouge 😆
Aww!! Arush and Sana!

Great job abavi! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Such a sweet sweet one...😃
Loved Arush and sana😉Sid and arnav...thy bth can never change😆😆
Lovely ending di...😃
thank u so much for the story😃

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