ArHi FF: Checkmate Epilogue thread (12th mar upd)

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

i dont know how i missed the epilogue... it was just awesome :D loved the 4 to the core

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Wow! The epilogue was brilliant👏

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-devil-

@-devil-

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

read this fantabulous FF in a GO!!

OMG

Loved it 😃

im not getting where to start from?

and sab choro epilogue was tooo goood yar!!

their son awww...

and i loved sid's character, hugs to sid.

Shayamu made me Cry 😭

Gayathri.. i love this woman yar!

Shayamu was the best!!!!

Suggested this FF to my frnds and one of them started yestrdy!!

damn!

that girl didn't sleep last night and completed whole FF last night..

and now she is sleeeping gadhay ghoray bech kar 😆

you are an awsum writer!

twist and turns in d story were ik dam bindaas!!

and again i'll say SHAYAMU.. i loved him.. 😭

Arush... awww paala baby 🤗

Arnav

khushi

akash

payal

Anjali

Lavanya

Ashok

Rana

Dhruv

Daadi

Aman

Gayathri

SID

SHAYAM

Sb characters ik dam bindaas!!

WONDERFUL FF!!

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Nyc story n nyc thread!!!!

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Loved it kapt me hooked till the end :)

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

read through all the parts..

this story is sure a masterpiece 👏

arshi s wedding...her way of convincing him...her leaving him because of shyam s threats...

shyam was sure a surprise element...but his role was been written beautifully...

every character had its own aura...

it was pleasure reading😃

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Hi Abavi!!

i read the FF all in one go! and i was amazed with the story line you created here!

Just too good !i enjoyed the twists and turns in it! ...

Thanks for sharing it here dear! :)

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Hey the epilogue ending was very funny and lightened the mood of the last few chapters.

Felt a deep respect for Shyam you know, and that is very rare.

The story started out a bit lame, but with Rana-Druv-Dadi-Gayatri it geared up well.

Sometimes I felt like killing you as the suspense was killing me lol. You took a long time to reveal it yaar.

Hey and you even made me get angry over Kushi for her selflessness which might be a first for me. I always take Kushi's side no matter what and support her selfless acts even if it is too much, but here it triggered my anger. Like Arnav said, she staying away for 2 years from him, keeping his son's birth and those stages away from him was not justifiable even for the sake of Arnav's own life. I differ there with Kushi there and agree with Arnav.

Because unlike Kushi, Arnav was dying out of pain. And turning up at the door with a flirty guy, I had the urge to murder her, wonder what Arnav would have thought of. Arnav missing those years with his son and wife is not valid for a man like Rana. If she was to leave, they could, but at least through Gupta family or through a letter left for Arnavji by Kushi with the Guptas, through one of these means Kushi should have let Arnav know about all this.

What if Sid and Shyam were really nasty and like she said when she met Shyam, what if she was really cheated. How was she going to answer Arnav ever again!!!

And also I felt bad for Arnav at the end regarding his mother Ratna. He deduced it right, it was fate, that gave me an ease. I really feel Agrim and Gayatri were at fault, Agrim the most. Gayatri tried to rectify her mistake in her own ways and sacrificed many things. But Agrim left Ratna, his wife heart broken by letting her know that she is his illegl wife. If he had talked about his affiar, he should have revealed this too. Then if Ratna wanted to walk off he should have let her too.

And I don't think Arnav and Anjali were born out of love. Because, for Agrim he was responsible for Ratna and he considered as his duty but his love was always Gayatri. Ratna might had better chance at life. It is not her mistake to live a life with a man who can never love her, but only respect her as his wife and bear his children as it is natural.

I differ there too. But Arnav and Kushi attaining that conclusion let me be cool a little. But I still hate Papaji.

Poor Shyam, felt bad for him as he did somewhere love Anjali. Ashok, I didn't like him. Shyam deserved her more like Anjali said in those parts as he was there for her in need.

Sid was a wonderful character and La trying to find him J was superb.

Arnav-Sid banter, Dhruv-Kushi banter, was really nice.

The kids were cute too.

I loved this story. Read it in 2 days. Thank you so much for writing this. You have penned it well.

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saf93

@saf93

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

wow!!! the story was awesome!!! absolutely looved it!!! you are a great writer!!! keep it going!!!
and the epilogue too was superb!!!

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Aplihs

@Aplihs

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

A big round of applause. Came across this yesterday and finished today and all I can say is amazing. You weaved the charecters beautifully and kept the story very very gripping.

Now I shall start your other work and cannot wait