ArHi FF: Checkmate Epilogue thread (12th mar upd) - Page 12

hey i just wanna thank u for writing this piece...thoroughly enjoyed it...awsm ...the drama..romance..emotion...fun...fight all are justified... the best part is...u met all the desires nd unasked questions of a reader..start to end..👏donno how to express all the 76 parts ..yet giving a try..

i wud luv to mention one of my fav chap---reveling Shyam's true motive to ASr---awsmly written...its very rare in FFs...even in soaps too, to spare not a single loophole in the game plan..as a reader...when i was reading shayms justifications...watever quesn'es..rose in my mind in was answered wid a bang...luvd dat part...every-who did..what did..why did how did...was well answered..

small indication and big implecations..just ryt under the nose..dats wat i felt of prakash's phn call nd gardeners entry...i felt sumthing was wrong but didn guess one cud be a martyr nd and other as assassin..!

d drama n suspense was its highlight...initially i was bound to suspect Akash-mama duo other than mallik...but thnk god its was rana the master plotter...other wise i wud be hurt..😆..

i hated khushi's sudden disappearance-as it was highly risked---but later on well justified from her POV...but still i agree wid ASR as it all was unnecessary whn ASR didn want thorn or the wealth..!

khushi- sid entry was heart tearing the nonchalant behaviour of khushi toward ASR---i hated her why she did so..not even a hug or warmth...rather playing along wid sid...nd sid i hated him dat tym...but i relaxed whn came to knw it was laa's plan...but why khushi behaved so? i hated her..
but the misleads u showed was qyt tricky but true...nd brillient play on dat part...

d same questions even rose on my mind why gayetri hide the truth whn her confession cud have made raizada lives easier and the separation wud not be needed..nd i start doubtin gaytri..but agn it was justified...

it was surprizing--whn i hated shyam..he turned out to be a selfless guy...whn i hated sid he prove to be a sweetheart..whn i hated..druv..he turned to be pawn too...whn i hated gayatri-agrim.. thy r are also turn out to be a victim of fate.(though i still cant forgive agrim...as it was his fault to other than dadi..but atleast gayetri tried to mend up dat..).!...nd yaa...for the first tym got to read Prakash clan as an imp role other than shivering in front of mighty ASR..😊

luvd Sid..❤️ (though u put kinshuk but i cudn help but imaginig karan wahi----donno fo me this role no one cud have justifyt other than him---its good to imagine karan+ sana khan...nd jolly karan vs grumpy barun 😃 )there are several places he actually made me ROFL...specially the rana vs sid for signing paper..it was hilarious..or the epilog fyt 🤣...my fav .nd ever green sid Vs ASR tom n jerry fyts...{ohh i even luvd this chemistry more thn arShi or SidYa------they just won me 🤪}

since i came to knw the fact dat Sid nd lavanya the cute cpl...nd raizada vs "Khamoshi" 😉.. i only wished...u can even say desired to see how immaturely asr n sid will fyt, nd how maturely asr n laa will behave as samdhi if junior raizada fall in luv some day wid ms. Khamoshi...😆 i even started dreming that lavanya wud have a baby girl nd wud be named SiYa(SId+lavannYA) as ArUsh's girl(ARnav+khUSHi)...

nd here in epilog my fantasy came true...i was overwhelmed...to read the ending...so wat its sana not sia...all dat matter is raizada son in luv wid mokashi daughter..!! only if NK n Druv wud get someone..


but never mind...the last fyt b/w sid ASR was more than a treat...for my starving soul...🤗

just 1 ques...as i loathed anjali fo her shyamu obsession,,,,

shyam is a nyc guy ok..but did he ever luvd anjali...though ashok was her 1st luv...but she luvd shyam too...evn she gone to fake a pregnancy..nd put khushi in risk only to save her mrg...doesn shyam knew she luvd him dat much!! first luv is first luv i agree...but she happily moved on too..nd later shyam is d only thing she wanted ever...so why shyam took d decn to leave her..nd handover to ashok[---who claim to luv her but cudn support her whn needed most!!!]..as his tym issues, her old flames nd etc...but did he ever tried to mend d relation. wid her gabe atry ?? separation dcsn shud be a mutual one!!..is it justified u leave ur spouse thinking of old flames of her life...if shyam tried he cud be the best partner for her...all the happenings were just for tym beings...

these cud be easily avoided if dad n gayetry planed to let he truth reveal initially...

-asr back off'ed frm the mallik property..thn
-anjali cud be happily married to either shyam or ashok --as he came bk earlier..divorce cud be avoided..
-no harassment fo khushi..
-no contract mrg...no MU of arshi...
-no threats fo family
-no separation...no suffering
-shyam cud be alive
-----oppss druv wud be in danger...but someone had to die ryt ...shyam or druv...but rest wud lived a carefree life!
😆 well if these were not here thn thr wont be any story 😆
ohh yea..if these wud not hpnd ...laa n sid wud hv never met..thn no sana n arush...nashiii...jo v hai its perfect...👍🏼


okiz okiz...last query...ehm ehm as arshi bedroom was under microphn----wid besharam arnav n vold khushi k wajase ...their private talks n sounds ki toh sattya nash hogaye naa...😆 rana woh sab tap ka kya kia???😉

Wow a great story you made every bad character in the drama a positive one eg. Shyam and Dadi, loved the story to bits ⭐️ 👏

amazing story.
n epilogue was beautiful.

a beautiful ending to an owsem story..

Hey abavi. Came cross this ff yesterday. From that tym i was reading it continuously. I really loved it. You knw first time i loved shyam's character more than others. I was crying when he died. Epilogue was super entertaining. Good start and good end.

WOWOWOWOW..
Superb...
Great...
:-)The epilogue was PERFECT...
I guessed that gayatri would have exchanged kids... But i went wrong...

so now i ended up reading the whole story of cheakmate ... i love ur writing ...!!!!!!!!! :)

Amazing FF read it in one go

Waah waah! What a different story. Not the usual run of the mill, romantic ones we see on IF, but rather a pot boiler of a story that had all the right mix of ingredients. Loved this mysterious cum romantic/cute drama based on greed of one person. This was totally a 'paisa wasool' kinda read for me. 3 cheers to the twists and turns you introduced throughout, that it successfully grabbed my attention for the entire length of the ff.

Oh did i tell you, i absolutely loved sid, the character. In fact, one day i was eating food while reading your ff, and then i read sid's retort to arnav, n i burst out laughing, so much so that the food was in danger of coming outta my nose :-P ha ha ha. And what a drama 'queen' he was after being wounded from the bullet shot. Loved it!

1 small complaint, i was looking forward for more of anjali's reaction, when she came to know the truth that shyam wasn't a snakewa after all. Her reaction was kinda ended abruptly. However, i do understand, you were worried about the chapters being lengthy, as it is. Similar to your other readers, i was rooting for shyam to pull through after the bomb blast, but sadly it didn't happen. He did make a special place in our hearts even after what all we assumed wrong about him n hating him in the first half of the story. So kudos to you for effectively managing that amongst your readers.

All in all, i loved this ff. All the best for your other writing ventures.

amazing,extra ordinary,awesome,superb ff nd the same goes 2 ur writing skills😊am truly impressed😉