New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72 - Page 7

awesome start
continue soon
cant wait to read more

U saucechips r one person whose pms r eagerly awaited by me...!!! For obvious reasons!!!! Man its so excitibg to c dat u're Pm has graced its presence among us lesser beings... I know u have one onhold Ff but koi baat nai... Ultimately it only matters wether we r gettin an interesting read by u or not!!! Wether it is dat Ff or dis Ss wich i must admit reminds me of JAB WE MET!!! in a distnt way atleast.. Nt same thou... U know its so funny just lyk u're trademark writings

D strt only got sO excitin... asr's in a train dat too in khushi's cOmpartment!!! Ultimately unexpctedly expected rite...;)

D dialogues man... Plz tell me where do u get dis humor from...!! I need to know... Nd d dialgue in wich arnav says to anji dat he is not 2 yr old nd he nows where to get off was just a golden one...!!! Hahahahaha!!!!!!! D song ended juat at d rite moment!!! W8n to c how dere train journey continues bd how dey continue to kill each other!!!!

whn a frnd told me abt ur update i was like she updated yay yay..
hahah how miuch i love khushi's mumblings..
u cracked me up with this part
Yes, take that mister, I just gave you a royal ignore. Yes, I find my cracker more interesting than you. * MUNCH* LOL, look at his face.🤣
lol lol lol khushi and her eating abilities..😆 chicken is dead.. lolzz
absolutely loved the khushi here..👏😃
I hope u feel ok soon and come back with all ur updates.. no pressure don't wry.😳 U hv given me enough on this update to go 🤣

OMG! that was awesome
ROFL loved it please update soon!

Hey... U r back with a new ss... This is beautiful and hilarious... Arnav and khushi train journey..wow

Welcome back!

This was such a good start...I really hope you will continue it soon!

Tumhara ek apna hi style hai writing ka n i loved ur style
...update was awesome kai dino baad kisi ff ko pad k hasi aayi. ... 🤣 thnks a lot for dis one. .I hope k next update jaldi hi milega 😳 thnks for a beautiful n intersting cute update n pm 🤗

SUPER DUPER AWESOME START! I just loved it :D Arshi in a train? lol sounds like a fun filled ride :) Looking forward to it very much :D

Omg Sabiii!!! How r uuu! Hope u r well. Have been waiting for ur update!! Omggg brilliant as usualll! Khushi n her food! Loool! Cnt wait for the next part!
Thankuuu for the pm xx

lol very entertaining update...waiting for the next update...