New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

hey me and ma frnd r di was chatting on fb and di told me u updated.. yeee🥳 so hpy to see u regular yaar.. hey hey wait dn't let the heart get broken into pieces again. me and di had full faith in u.. 🤗
hayeee the hot shot at least showed here tht he cares. warna hum jo arnav ko jante hai he tends to shw care by making ppl fall from 2nd floors of offices or hurting arms 😳
khushi is such a sanka devi. i luvvv her 😃 and the way he kept on comparing arnie with prince william.. 😆
and they r stuck in a railway station.. just wondering wht riot these two might create..
*hehe cudn't stop myself from suggesting, cud u plzz be inspired from jab we met a bit ?? plzz . it wud b so much fun to see arshi going through all wht hond in the movie in ur style.. but again its just a suggestion. I alrdy luv whtever u write.😃*

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Loved every bit of the update. Was just a teeny weeny bit dissapointed that they didn't sleep on opposite berths, facing each other, with a little Rabba ve moment... but of course, establishing him as a gentleman is more important.

Now with the train taking a detour, and bad weather, not to mention Naxalites lurking in the dark... the story can only get more interesting. Eagerly waiting for the next update... with images of Jab We Met (my all time favorite movie) playing in my head.

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BublyKhushi

@BublyKhushi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

really doing bhangara dance

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Awesome update Sabi !! 😊

Your innate ability to be so humorous and at the same time make me want to sigh has done wonders again! Love it! Loving this SS! It's just..purrr-fect! 😊

"...that Mr hot shot had a hint of noble blood in him" Realization dawns..finally 😆

Hahahaha Prince William!! ASR's new name!! Not cement pile this time 😉

And his reply to her questions! "Do I look like a Naxalite?" I can imagine his deathly glare at her 😆

"..keeping in mind you called this train last night a 'bloody rocking chair',it's going to be close to adventure sports for you" 🤣

Khushi is so hilarious. Lying to her Jiji that she had "saved the day" 😆 Trust Khushi to say that!

Ohw..so the journey continues. I thought Arnav & Khushi would be stuck..together in the remote Alinagar ..like in the Nainital trip 😳

But oh well, front front dekhungi hota hai kya 😆

Loved the update!!

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Bonhi

@Bonhi_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

oh gr8...Arnav & Khushi stuck in a train..make that journey never-ending😉.

The so very different rabba ve's that we can get...like a Particularly violent jerk & maybe this time our Arnav bitwa comes tumbling down upon Sankadevi eh? *im off 2 day-dreaming*

n awww...Arnav got the couple so that Khushi doesnt feel uncomfortable..& khushi blabbering 2 payal abt her literally saving the day in 4nt of Arnav..rofl. From cement pile 2 having the expressions of a hangman..all these innocent things will nvr evr be the same 4 me [i actually start blushing on seeing cement & just this day my frnds caught that n was xtremely concerned abt my sanity] *facepalm*

thnx 4 the pm...cant wait 2 find out what happens nxt..!!!!

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

awesome

tom is my exam and still i am here reading your ss...

can you see how important your work is to us

hahah

very nice update

i could clearly imagine all

must say great update buddy

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MKyara

@MKyara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

haha...Khushi is such a...show-off? :P hehe...complimenting herself with her own made-up story...hehe
loving how this is proceeding...:D
Do Update Soon...:D

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Arnav really cares about her...

He slept with strangers or slept with Khushi😆.

Khushi's phone conversation 🤣 OMG

Pickle and first time travelling in train.. lol

Imagine Khushi with chocale completely over her cheks lips and finger eyes like saucer.. Arnav cant delete this image soon from his mind

Thanks for pm

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Wow...expectedly unexpected

had a feeling that you will update tpday

The update was picture perfect

could visualise what you had written

I am sure this khushi will test the patience of St:Raizaada

Thx for the PM

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Shinja

@Rainbow_petals

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Oh wow this is amazing and i am sure next time when i will travel in train i am surely gonna have this story in my mind !!!

That was sweet of Arnav to do something for Khushi but poor boy he never know how much the women can chat and more excitedly in trains !!
So the Kashi express running again..

Waiting to read more..