New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

lol typical of Khushi to self praise herself!!
and man u still habe that humorous way of writing things!!
love it!!
and poor Arnav lol! stuck in the middle of nowhere!

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Denaid

@Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

And along with Kashi Express, KHUSHI EXPRESS, went on and on, yapping all the way to their destination!!!!!

That was one hell of an update... Poor Arnav, his 1st experience with trains turned out to be along with Khushi Kumari Gupta... His journey towards insanity!!!!! I feel for u man ;)

U updated so soon, breaking records, it looks like... Keep it up;)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

so glad you are back... :) brilliant brilliant work... I still cant stop laughing. ... khushi really is one of a kind... n arnav is well arnav... im sure khushi will make sure arnav never forgets his first train journey...:)

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

I've been wondering why I don't get PMs for his one. I used to get them for PU. Then I remembered that I have changed my username. Please could you PM me when you update next. Luckily for me I found this story by chance and ead it.

Loving the train ride. Your writing is so visual, I can imagine all this taking place in front of my eyes. It was typical of Khushi not to sleep and sit there chatting with the lady. It is normal for prince Raizada to go crazy. On top of everything Khushi taking credit for saving the situation was hilarious.

I had a lovely time reading it. Thankyou.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Brilliant and fantastic, I'm just loving this story more and more, the train journey for Arnav and khushi is just fantastic. Khushi is just so funny, awww Arnav was so sweet when he realised khushi was feeling uncomfortable sleeping near three men, he went and got the old couple to come and sleep with them that was so nice of him. By the way what is a naxailties? Please continue soon and can you please PM when you update, thanks.

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

OMG OMG I just loved it ! I just loved it ! I just loved it ! Awesome ! Khushi and Arnav r amazing in ur Ffs and SSs !

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Awesome update loving how Khushi was saying how she saved the day. Arnav was sweet bring the old couple to make Khushi more comortable.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

mindblowing update loved it thanks for the pm

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GunM

@GunM

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

all the train journey reminds me of the time when i sat in an indian train for the first time

my reaction was somewhat like that of Arnav😆

super update...and thanx for the pm

Edited by GunM - 12 years ago

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#260

with PU being on hiatus i thought you wont continue writing but i am so good that its not the case.
i really enjoy your writing style and i cant wait embark this journey of next stop with you.