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noreen

@noreen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Krani plz ud caught soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thnks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

read the whole story...wonderful creation dear... hope ul be continuing this soon...long with arranged marriage :)

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hillykhan

@hillykhan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Hey Krani ! :D
... anxiously and desperately awaiting updates for AM and Caught !
hoping everything's going well with you.
...
both your latest updates on Caught and esp. loving AM is just FANTABULOUS ! .. I've got no words, truly magical and just WOW.
I've read your other pieces and well, I was wondering since 'Scandal' sounds so intriguing .. and I would really really really love to read it since you're my fav and I've been really looking forward to reading a really good piece of work.
I know how you feel and plagiarists really suck and I truly feel your pain along with other writers who have gone through this. It really hurts when you've worked abs. so hard to produce your own work, yet it gets stolen. *hugs*
anywhoot, could you possibly email/PM it to me if you've still got it available on you. I'll be really thankful and no, you don't have to worry about having your work stolen again, i'll keep it to myself.

do let me know !

thaaanks,

xxx :D <33

Edited by hillykhan - 12 years ago

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

I just loved reading the chapters posted in thread 2.
I love how the mystery is unraveling layer by layer.
I am happy that khushi is with Arnav. Hope shyam
doesn't get to put his devious plans into action. The
way you have expressed the grief khushi was undergoing
while she was having nightmare was really awesome.
It just gave me goosebumps. Eagerly waiting for your next
update.

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Krani - I have a big beef with you 😕

You write so well 👏

you have such wonderful stories 👏

yet you dont finish them 😕

Why ?

Pls update 😛

I am also waiting for Arranged Marriage for months now 😕

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

I just began reading this story. And I can't seem to read it fast enough! I'm on Ch 12 and that fishing Shyam! He's just killed Babuji. I'm hoping for a miracle? I hope that Fishing Shyam gets it from Arnav. Geez, why am I such a slow reader!!!!! I've been reading for 45 min!

This is such a gripping tale of Arnav and Kushi. And what's with their past? Is The 'Raajkumari' that Garima is speaking about, Kushi?

Ohh! Wish I was a fast reader!

Thanks for sharing your story. It's just fabulous!

I love Arnav's character so far. He is strong and moral. He seems to have feelings for Kushi but is not dwelling on them so far. Although, he can't seem to get her off his mind.

Love Shyam's character that is so negative. What the hell else can he do? He is a murderer, not only killing innocent women in the name of the law, but now killing Babuji. And his basic lust for Kushi, eeewww!

OK, I'm going back to read now.

tfs

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

i just caught up with the story and to tell u that it was an amazing one till now.
looking forward to it.
the thriller and the suspense is so in tact, not a clue??? who is Khushi or what all the fuss about her is...
enjoyed it till now and waiting for u to update it. hope u don't leave it in the middle, plz continue soon.

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

awesome

so who is she really

y was she being protected bef n from whom

dam curious

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Have u abandoned this story.. Its such a wonderful story. I really hope u complete it.

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Hello lady!!!

I have recently started reading fan fictions and this is the first time am reading your work... I have thoroughly enjoyed myself and had a wonderful time reading 'caught'.

The story is so gripping that I could not keep my eyes away from my phone screen until I reached chapter 20

You are an amazing writer, you describe every scene so well that I feel am watching a movie 😊

I like ur Arnav...rough n tough😳

You have excelled in creating a worthy villain in Shyam... He is disgusting...psycho, lecher...and he is an officer 😡

Bad cop-good cop, drama, action, suspense...aapki film mein sab masala hai... And why do I feel we have not even reached the 'interval' yet?

I am really really hoping that you finish this story

PS: thanks for keeping this story on IF and not removing it else late comers like myself would be totally deprived of the amazing work that has already been created

Edited by sarahjac - 12 years ago