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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Why not darling ... Plz-2 start it soon... Nice concept... Plz update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
hey dear loved ur ff's cs... u should continue soon.. pm me also if possible.. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
WOW😊😊😊

NICE ONE. GREAT THOUGHT👏👏👏

PLZ PLZ CONTINUE FURTHER😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
It is greattt plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys,
Thanks for all d comments..

First of all sorry for late post,
Its only because i have edited and reedited this part more than 10 times..lol

I am more nervous than my first ff nw..
I hope i don't disappoint you all..

Enjoy reading and hit like and comment..


Taarey ff:Towards love-part1

Mumbai-
D3 dance academy.

Swayam-omg god guys,tum nahi jaanti rey ka behaviour agar uski performance ya classes ya phir usks shecdule main thoda bhi kadbad hui to na,
woh tum sab ka tho chodo,pura academy hilaakar rakh dekha,waise uska naak main guss rahtha hai, is hafthe main
yeh theesra secretary hai uske yeh attitude se reisgnation de diya.
ab tum log ek secretary nahi doondh par rahi ho,aur uska performance bhi hai delhi main..
god aaj mujhe and iss acdemy ko bachana rey ke gusse se..

rey calls..
Swayam:hello
Rey:tumahara awaaz ko kya hua?
Swayam:tu kahan pe hai,woh main rasthe mainhoon,koi bewakoof ke wajas se traffuc main fassa hoon yaar..
ab late hojaayegi,tu mere liye woh secretary se mera aaj delhi wala performance keliye sab tyaar rakhawaadena..
Swayam-kya bola?
Rey:tumhe ho kya aajtha hai swayam?
Swayam-secretary,agar main karoon to problem hai tumein
Rey:tu mera kaam kyun karega?
Swayam:tum mera dost haina islye.
Rey:woh secretary kisliye rakha maine.
Swayam:woh
Rey:1 minute,kya baat hai swayam,
Swayam:woh rey,woh secreatary bhi chali gayi..n main call rakh rahi hoon,baacki main tumari guss academy main dekhloonga..bye.
Rey:hello ,swayam..
errr,yeh swayam bhi na,aaj ka din pura scdeule ulta pulta jaayega..
koi nahi hai kya iss duniya main koi cheez taang se kar sakoon,unproferesional log,kaam ke upar koi responsibilty naam ka koi value hi nahi..
Rey stops his bmw in d academy n gets out..
Students makes way for..
Gals are drooling over his hotness.
Gals:pata nahi sun hot hai ya yeh..

He removes his sunglasses..
Rey:classes nahi hey kya tum logon ko huh,yah suspension chahiye.
Gals:sorry sir.
Rey:out of here,
now

and enters d academy...


Swayam-pheww..
Sharon enters..
Sharon:kya hua,dont tell me tum mujhe yeh subah subah yeh batana keliye aane ko bola ki rey ki thessra secretary bhi baag gaya..
Swayam:bhaag nayi gaya,woh resighnation dekar gaya..
Sharon:omg,ab
Swayam:ab bhaagwaan hi uskeliye secreatary doondh saktha hai..


Delhi-
A blind person was trying to cross the road.
A gal stops s scooty n removes d helmet and comes and held his hand..
Hello uncle,main taani,main aapko help karthi hoon road cross karne main..
Uncle:thank u beta..
Taani:its k
after crossing d road..
Uncle:tumhe zaisa pyaar karne wala mile jo tumhe tumhari zindagi ki saare mossibatomain tumhara saath de..
Taani:dua deejiye uncle,batdua nahi,mujhe yeh pyaar vyaar karne wala nahi chhaiye,mere liye mera bhaai kafi..
ab mujhe chalna hoga..
Taani goes.
Uncle:Tumhe zaroor apna pyaar milega,tum tab kehna yeh batdua nahi tha,aur bas ek chota dua meri tarah se beta..


Mumbai-
swayam calls taani
Taani-hello bhaai,kaise ho..
Swayam-tumahri collge khatam hua na,to tumhe agaliflight main yahan honi chahiye tha na taani
Taani:aa rahi hoon bhaai,bas thoda kaam baacki tha..
Swayam-kaisa kaam,
Taani-woh chodiye na,main kal aa rahi hoona bhaii
swayam-teek hai..
taani-bye

Rey enters..
Rey-(Shouts)swayam
Phone fell from swayam's hand..
Swayam-yeh lo yeh bhi giraadi tumne..
Rey-tumhe tumari phone ki padi hai,arre yaar ek dang sa secreatary nahi rakh sakthe tum log..
Sharon-tum ek secretary sambal nahi saktha rey,swayam se kya chialaana..
Rey-ohoh,aagayi tum..
Swayam-aise bolona sharon
Rey-main kuch nahi jaantha,mujhe don din ek secreatary chahiye,woh bhi contract sign karke iss baar rakhna.
n leaves.
Swayam-hey bhagwaan,iskeliye ladki doondna asaan hai,par sereatry kahaan se lekar aavoon main..

Precap-
Rey n taani meets that too when taani spills cofee over rey's shirt before his performance.
Rey:tum
Taani-kaddoss tum
Rey-taani,omg,dont tell me tum taani ho..


So guys hope u all loved my update..
Please tell me how u guys liked it..
N tell me whether i should continue..
I apologize,if it was boring and i have let down all ur expectations..
If u guys loved it,please please give me comments..
silent readers atleasts hit like yaar...

Part2

Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome update, Rey secretary quit nice lol now Taani can be Rey personal secretary hmm. Omg Swayam was too funny hanging up on Rey and then dropping his phone lol. Love Taani intro she is a sweetheart. And this update was not boring at all I love it plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Hmmm very interesting concept cant wait to read more love how Taani says dhua dijia batbua nai lol😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
You knw wat i just luv ur ffs and is wale ke liye ek bohooot bada aur tight wala hug...!! 🤗 🤗
I m in luv with all the characters yaar!!
Lage raho!! Continue soon please!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: toshi_ta

You knw wat i just luv ur ffs and is wale ke liye ek bohooot bada aur tight wala hug...!! 🤗 🤗
I m in luv with all the characters yaar!!
Lage raho!! Continue soon please!!


thank u so much dear..
ek bada wala hug mere taraf se bhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
wow... interesting... amazing update... thanks for the pm and plz update soon...

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