Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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chupachup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

loved the new one..

update soon Smita

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rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Really nice OS. Waiting to know what happens next

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rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

I hope now Arnav understands her worth ! Thanks for this wonderful OS. Waiting for next update.

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orchids8888

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Hey dear,

Thanks for the pm.

I must really appreciate your creativity. I really admire the way you come up with new ideas to write stories.👏 I read all 3 updates in one go. I really loved the concept and all updates.👍🏼

Poor Khushi m feeling bad for her. 😭But I guess even Arnav is also suffering.😭

Continue soon. Eager to know how story progresses.

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ayushma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Arnav couldn't say a word, could he? I was expecting him to yell at her and carry her to RM. But, the tables have turned, Khushi told him what she wanted him to hear.

Although it hurts her saying it, but if Arnav is not owing up to her, then why is she bending her back to get a reaction from him. He ruthlessly agreed to marry Lavanya, yet he wants her to be with him? Sheesh!

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wonderblake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Yay, party time you started another OS Series.

Loved the start, and the two chapters that followed.

Continue soon with the next part.

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

OMG!

This was awesome and the advertisement punches were hilarious! 🤣

Waiting for the next Smita!

@Rashmi - Thanks for the PM!

Love

Mrina

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jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
read three update together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was really good!!!
but is khushi engaged to shyam???

w8ng for next!!!!!!!!!!!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Thank you for the pm, Rashmi, and I've sent the buddy request. Didn't realise I hadn't done so earlier, sorry 😳!

another wonderful update... the elderly man and the young girl needed the company of the friendly voice on the radio, the songs, the news... what loneliness is inherent in these lines! the seamless blending of the song and the ads with khushi's and arnav's roiling emotions was just amazing... poor khushi, having to deal with the pangs of first love and that, too, unrequited, as she believes! the very idea of khushi needing to be tempted to eat goes against the grain... The radio played an advertisement for slimming tea. a highly ironical juxtaposition as khushi is naturally slim, besides now losing weight due to her emotional turmoil and lack of appetite... loved khushi apostrophising arnav as spineless and unworthy of her love... good of her to lay the truth bare before arnav that there isn't much to choose between arnav and his sister in the cold-blooded manner in which they manipulate things to get their way!

I was pretty irked when, in the show, khushi went about doing her work at shantivan as if nothing untoward had happened between her and anjali... she was as friendly and involved as before... I wanted to see her going about her work, maintaining the distance between employer and employee [the relationship anjali reduced their friendship to the moment she blackmailed khushi about the money owed] rather than behaving as a friend... Smita, your take acted as a balm! eagerly awaiting arnav's next move

Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago