Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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PARVATHY44

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Amazing
Read all the three parts in one go
Loved the different version of ipkknd
Continue soon

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foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Great stuff! All the emotions and agony both are going through were nicely penned down. I really liked the way Khushi stood up to herself when Arnav came and questioned why she is trying to avoid his family who gave her love and respect. As usual Arnav is a thoroughly confused sole, wants her at the same time doesn't want to give a chance to his feelings and not willing to listen to his heart. Waiting to see how the story is gonna unfold.

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

I absolutely love the way how you put the commercial dialogues...that was so new way!!!!

loved the update...hmmm... yeah kushi is changing ... and loved how she answered arnav... perfect...

looking forward to what will arnav do... or like always his ego will stop to make any advances toward kushi...

looking forward to the next part

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emistry

@emistry

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Oh man! They both have broken hearts! I hope Arnav can mend this! I wonder where is Shyam in all of this?!

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Loved the update 😊

looking forward to know what will arnav do 😃

Waiting for the next part

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monsi08

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

awww... m blessed smita 😃 !thanks alot dear

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akanksha84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

i liked the ads going in BG with their heart wrenching convo!!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

loved this Khushi.. rendering ASR speechless.. too good.. and ASR just walked away.. thats different.. lets c what he does now..

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soniaanna

@soniaanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Ads on he radio were great, waiting to read the next parts

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Arshipriya16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Are u regulerly hear radio?What an update Smita,cnt understand that cry for Arshi or lough on ur ads,complan girl and vics & macchar agarbatti too!!! just hillarious!!!.

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