Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last)

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Deepthi

@deepz_SI.BS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

such a wonedrful story , i read this story in 2 days , like in 8hrs , AMAZING READ ,

you have amazingly written every emotion , its beautiful <3 , i had a great time reading it <3

im gonna start MKM 2 now .. <3

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#632

superb,awesome and heart touching story

i was really hooked with this story and can't leave it untill finished

amazing and fabously written.

great job u wrote it very very well

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Chap 30 - Awesome ending loved d reception party, Disneyland fun & Hawai honeymoon 😳

Finally read a ll d chaps Awesome SS

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#634

i read this story once again today...awesome

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#635

just re-read the whole story again! This Arnav is much easier to handle than the one in MKM2 😆

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#636

So simple yet so beautifull

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#637

Such a sweet journey this story has been...!!
Really liked your art of description and portayel of characters..!!
I am obliged to Arshisarunfan for suggesting me this beautiful fine piece and more than obliged to you for creating such a beauty and sharing it here on the forum :)
Will read more from you once I get rid of my semester exams..!!
Keep writing more..
Take care
Kiran

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arsalarahman

@arsalarahman

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#638

read it the third time just now...simply love it

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#639

I loved the way you summed up the story in the summary in your writing index. True to the words, Khushi was indeed a girl who was not at all making an attempt, as was misjudged by Arnav. So it was indeed tad difficult to know that he had been treating her poorly.

There were many facets to Arnav's character even when it came to Khushi or otherwise; the feelings he depicted towards his nephew and niece, his gradual realization of his sentiments towards Khushi were all so potent!

The characters of Adit and Adya were a breath of fresh air in the story which possessed the sentiments of the protagonists in amplitude.

It was also interesting to have Akash Roy. He began as a good, if not endearing character but the turn that was showcase made me dislike him. But i'm like he was given a fitting closure.

All in all a nice story😊