Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last)

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latha72

@latha72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

loved reading the whole story... really wonderful. thank you

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lalpeeli

@lalpeeli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

just read this story today and must say t was very touching

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Destinyhope0305

@Destinyhope0305

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Just read all the chaps ..
N a big Thank You for .Sandy. who recommended ur story ..
trying to tell u how great full i m to come across dis piece !

Arnav always hits below the belt wen it comes to khushi !! at least at first !! Its like he has dis goblin kinda think in his head who kinda controls him like a puppet !!

N wen he is out of his hypnotism he is all back to his mood n starts panicking pondering abt what the hell did he do !!!

He has his own way of showing his regrets!!
You showed the exact arnav !!

In all ur updates i find him as a dog in the manger wen it comes to khushi !! all possessive !! n may i say i m a big fan of an utterly frustated-out-of-jealousy ASR !!

Instead of lovy-dovy romance i sometimes prefer Arnav's jealousy scenes all together ..N u have portrayed it quite well ..

U carved arnav perfectly !! The hatred , the jealousy , the selfishness, the gawky attitude, the childishly sulky behavior , his persecution .

N abt khushi .. Well her naivety,, the vague nature , her down-to-earth personality ,her empathy ,her self consciousness ,her pensiveness ..
She really was so perfect in all chaps .. poor soul till the end dint know ASR was utterly jealous of her n akash's frdship .. she had dat cutest blush on her face all the time .. all shy .. i wonder what their SR went.. just being a little naughty .. cant control myself wen it comes to arshi .. they lift me to the heights of passion !!

All beautifully described by u !!

When i started reading i thoroughly got attached to the story but to be truthful after a few chaps i got a little aberrated from the actual flow knowing dat anjali was gone , shyam was gone n now even Nani .so hw will they unite considering the family members are the cupid themselves wen it comes to arshi .
n den to add to the troubles , she was orphan ..
But i was stunned to see hw u managed the story well !! Very well done !!

U perfectly have shown the transformation of an evil into a more worthy careful person ..!!

In all the chaps i think akash really played the role of a cupid Unknowingly ofcourse !!

he really drove arnav into the world of jealousy where he actually came to know hw much khushi means to him !! so no matter what akash or his mom in dat sense did to khushi i really dnt hold any grudges against neither him nor his mom !!

I must say the FFs which i read are actually a blend of his family's drama plus Shyam's role too .. Hw can i forget Shyam !! they actually add texture to the story !!

But considering ur story which concentrated neither on Shyam's drama or arnav's betrayal n dat case .. But still ur story stood fantabulous out of all ..

I dint know arnav cud be dis romantic .. u showed all the shades of him ..the grey ones too.. His possessiveness to top it all ..

I love ASR more dan arnav ... he has got his own style of showing his love..

He believes in pinning khushi to the wall roughly to prove his love ! N what u showed the lightromance , the dates , the cute glances , the late night talks all amazing !!

Well done dear ..

P.S-

I must say i have read arshi ffs a lot , but never came across such adroitness in every chapter .. its like it was penned down by a professional .. No grammatical errors at all !! No slangs at all !! Not even a trace !! Highly impressed !!

P.P.S-
On my way to MKM season-2..

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Spent a wonderful two hours reading the story again.

What a beautiful story.

Wish you got this published.

Loved reading it AGAIN .😊

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Amazing story..loved it 😊 . Can't wait to read the making khushi mine-2...

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

amazing story👏👏👏 i have no words 2 describe how much i love this story😛 i read it in one go😊 i like ur writing style very much and i enjoyed reading each and every part of the story😊 now u can add one more member into ur fan list😃 i like this possessive arnav in ur story a lot😊 i like khushi's proposal in the middle of the ni8 before their marriage and the best part is arnav's proposal after that 😊 am glad that i came across ur FF😊 one word in which i can describe this FF is 'PERFECT' 😊 looking forward for more works from u😊 good luck😉

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Anjani

@akurmapu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Loved the FF so much 😊. Arnav and Kushi characters wonderfully written. AWESOME.

Arnav's love twoards Kushi from starting to end of the FF was awesome.

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

hey Anon!
read it again and you know what... i fell in love with it yet again.
Uff... you write with certain ada girl and i must tell you whenever i read ur ff/ss/os/ts i feel like i am ust flowing with the flow and everything is just so serene and peaceful. every time i read your updates, i just feel wow, i am reading some piece of writing that is just too inspirational at times. the little quotes you put in between the sentences and the way you make us swoon at your characters are just 👏...

the entire ff is sooo good that i loved it in every aspect. yes, the conversation was lacing and it was more of musings and monologues till later part of the story... but that is what sets you apart from the other writers... you has gained me as your fan permanently dear...
loved the multitude of emotions this update had shown and has given us to cherish.
keep writing
Happy New Year
God Bless!!!😊