Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I #7 ~ Chapter 30 (Last) - Page 66

Found this story and read in one go.simply amazing,loved while reading.i'm so exited to read ur other works.thanks for writting this

Re reading this after a long time :)

Wow Anon, I loved this story, read it from start to finish in one go, only stopping when life hot in the way.
Excellent story, loved how you kept it simple as its your first foray into FF.the story is pure Arshi so who could complain?

What did I love the most? Both characters superb, the kids were cute, but you didnt overegg the babytalk.I loved how you showed both sets of the thought process between the two which made the story come to life. Thank you for your story.

Wow. What a wonderful journey! I loved the flow of the story. There were no huge time leaps, no rushed physical or emotional intimacy, no unbelievable circumstances or any grand, out of the world proposals and in spite of that, it was such a beautiful story of love!

I loved how their relationship progressed, how they overcame their insecurities and fears gradually, started trusting each other, bared their emotions and found love. Two people, deprived of lasting love, starved of a sense of belonging, found everything that they had been looking for but had never hoped to discover, in each other. It is such a heart-warming feeling! They both deserved their share of happiness after all the tragedies that life burdened them with. And the two little angels! Having lost their own parents before knowing what it even means; they found their share of love with these two love-starved souls. All of them found their sense of family with each other!!!

It's a really well planned and executed story. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing! :)

Just BRILLIANT !!!
Had a wonderful time reading this FF again :)

wow...

Thoroughly enjoyed it, it was marvellous concept, amazingly well written! The joy and bliss of reading complete story is unparalleled...ThankYou so much for this wonderful read...hopping on to your next FF...MKM 2 :-D

Oh how I loved this story!!
I was hooked to this right from the start and couldn't stop till I finished it. I barely got anything else done around the house and I almost completely ignored my hubby and my son...:-D
You know what I loved most about MKM... Arnav and Khushi are the only predominant characters in the story and it's all about them.
I just cannot believe that it's your first piece of writing.. It certainly did not look like one!
I will definitely check out all your other stories but next on my list is MKM-2 for sure.
I will also send you a pm asking for the same but could I have your blog address please?
In the mean time, I better prepare my hubby and son for another one of my ignoring sessions ;-)

So good I read it twice! I realised I read it before at the first paragrah, so i continued to read the whole story again! Thats how good it is, especially the payback to Akaashs snotty mother. 😊