ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T2 (CHP 6 -12) - Page 47

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update...
plz pm me wen u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Aarti,

So i started reading your story and fell in love with your story so far. i have commented for this story on your blog but thought of penning down my thoughts here as well. So given below is thoughts about each chapter as i read them...

Prologue:
OK why was thapa who was just a regular worker described with such vividness...Intriguing.
Was there some conspiracy, was he murdered????.
Can't wait to read the rest.

Chapter1: I love love this smart, intelligent, kickass khushi...I can't understand till date why our original khushi couldn't be shown like this in IPK (she was like this initially and later the makers just killed her spirit...)😡

Getting back to the update loved this awesome spirited khushi and loved more the fact that Amanji is khushi's PA...(what will happen to arnav now???)

Chapter2: Wow what a dhamakedar entry of ASR. Could literally hear the ASR background music being played out. Pablo - Parminder Dhingra...😆So ASR is already dating sheetal and thinks khushi is an air head. Cant wait for these 2 to meet and the awesome challenges/arguments to begin...Bring it on

Chapter3: O.K so this time around it is khushi who has Daddy issues...guess this will play a huge role in her future relationship with arnav. Can't wait for their explosive face off.
Loved both their families...
Guess khushi will shock arnav to the core...

Chapter4: Wow...what an explosive breakfast meeting. So Khushi dented arnav's big ego in proving all his assumptions wrong.👏 Cant wait to see how ASR will may a comeback. So LA is a mom with 2 kids...never thought i will see that day..😛. I am becoming a big fan -no strike that 'AC' of this story already.

Chapter5: OK First things first Who is Sujoy Banerjee?????? Let him also be as dashing and dynamic as ASR, so that ASR suffers from some jealouswala feelings😉...Wow then posssesive ASR will kick into action...😃 Loved khushi during the press conference and loved loved the parts where ASR was naturally concerned about khushi's feelings.

Yuck with a father like that pity khushi's childhood...I am guessing the ending conversation was between Mr Mehra and Mr Shyam Jha (he has been missing in action for sometime now and remember he has to take revenge from khushi for making a fool of him.)

Chapter6: 'I...WE' mmm me loving itWhat an amazing update... You suprise me every single time.
So akash babua is the carefree chap here wheres his payalia????
Loved khushi's office. So i guess this office will get to see some great action in the near future. 😉
😉. So its 'Khushi' is it not Ms Gupta arnav is getting comfortable with khushi.😊

Chapter7: Somebody is out to kill Arun Mehra is it???😕 So La is a single mother...like her already. MMM so awareness has kicked in for ASR (so can we officially call this the first Rabba Ve of this FF)😃... .can't wait for the attraction to set in. So the snake makes back an entry...hoping to see some good old jealousy at the party.

Chapter8: So really i need to know 'Who is Sujoy Banerjee'?? wow so i guess the clasp at the waist was the 2nd Rabba ve hehehe (i need to snap out of this). Coffee late in the night wow how romantic...

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and sharing the same with us.

Liza

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Posted: 12 years ago

OK now that Sujoy's mystery is over the next thing i want to know is who are these 2 creeps who are plotting against khushi???? My detective mind says that its Mr. Obnoxious Mehra and Mr. Creepy Jha. 😡

Anyways no worries this khushi is smart, intelligent and confident so she is more than capable of taking care of herself. And if she falters the super hero Mr. Raizada will take care of her.😳

Coming back to the chapter all i can say is AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a cute 'unofficial Date'. Loved the fact that they are now pals. I guess we wont see arnav make anymore assumptions about Khushi. This definitely has to be my favourite chapter so far in this FF. Please write Jaldi jaldi na. Dying to know how they will interact at work the next day.


Liza


P.s: Do you PM when you update??? If yes then can i please request you to PM me whenever you update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was amazing night ... but who is that 2 men ..really it getting more interesting day by day
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Posted: 12 years ago
just finished reading d two chappys...nd i love both of dem...specially i am loving my khushi darling...she is so dam confident nd so dam perfct abt her work...ahhh i am loving her...
Nd my arnie boy is alwaz a sweetheart...good dat now they both r sharing a good rapport nd comfortable wit each other...
Nd i am happy dat now arnie boy is clear abt khushi nd sujoy's reltnship nd i am a bit more happy dat khushi was not serius abt dat sujoy nd arnie boy was nvr evr serius abt sheetal,so time for arshi's love story to start...
Suprb update di ⭐️
totally loved it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have a girl crush on Khushi, and surprise surprise! Arnav is preaching the benefits of being in a relationship to Khushi? That was entertaining to read! Loved seeing the camaraderie between the two of them grow. Intrigued with the little plot twist in the end. If I'm allowed to speculate, I'd point the finger at Khushi's father. He's highly suspect!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
so we finally know the story of sujoy, not as scandulous as i thought it would be😆
but it was nice how both were themselves with each other
not having had a good genuine laugh in ages
and who is that mystery man in the phone, i think its her dad and with shyaam?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally caught up with all the updates
It was a pleasure to read all the parts...loving the characterization...esp Khushi's practicality and her funny side
Concept is completely engrossing and I honestly cant wait to read the next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
arnav and khushi's friendship and new relation is brewing...
sunjoy was director and khushi's ex...
I think that was khushi's father who want to destroy her with the help of shyam.. just guessing
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shivi.10rocks

waiting for d next part.


Yep...will try my best to update by tomorrow :)

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