Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi#2 Part 13 (Last) Pg 63

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

read it in one go...beautiful one..
loved it..particularly arnav's character here..
khushi's antics were great...😆
u took d similar topic but moulded it into a totally new one...
ur an amazing writer..👍🏼..

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

OMG!!! Finally Shyam is caught!! But poor Anjali. Feeling bad for her. I wonder what will happen with Arshi now...will they be together? And what will happen with Shyam?? Will he come back to cause trouble?? Part 10 was awesome

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Part 11 was good. It was nice to see Arshi comforting each other. Hope Di heals soon.

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Just read part 12...Oh no I hope Khushi doesnt leave. This story is getting more and more interesting

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Awww what a cute OS!! Loved it!!! 😊😊😊

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

hun i have been out for months now...finally coming back actively on IF now and it seems like your stories keep getting better and better...wow this whole thing was awsuuum...loved it sooo very much..simply very amazing...loved khushi's innocence...simply wonderful dear...

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@Shinning_Angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Love the story very much...the track was fantastic with khushi and arnav working together to reveal the real shyam.I Love the Last scene...The whole story was just fantastic❤️