Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi#2 Part 13 (Last) Pg 63

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bs1224

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Read all parts its just superb man

Needed tissues for the last part

Loved it

Superb

Loved the chemistry ..how they exposed shyam...how the presented it everything was just PERFECT. ..

Loved it

Well done good job

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maxnruby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Read all the parts in one go!! And had an absolutely amazing time doing so. I could picture each and every scene like watching it on TV. You have a gift for writing and comedy. Also, the romantic/subtle moments between Arshi were very good. Gonna go read the 2nd OS now. Keep rocking!!

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sri91

@sri91

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#583

nice updates...
Read all parts in one go...
Simply fantastic..

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#584

That was so beautiful! Reading again. So commenting again!

I just loved Arnav's character in this SS. He let Kushi help him no end. Once he knew, he left no stone unturned to show is family the truth. And Kushi was right by his side. What a smart cookie she was!

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smiley-shiney

@smiley-shiney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#585

read all the parts in one go

loved the story

its very cute

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Eiman Sal

@EimanSal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#586

Smitar Ramachandran...!!

I never know u'r an amaixing writter too...

Woooaaahhooo i was in frnzy...Lost...it was wonderfull Sweet...

Beatiful n amaixing...

Stay Blessed..Muaahhh

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Srilatha

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Aww what a Cute OS loved it 👏

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Sugi

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Chapter 11 - 13 - Superb updates 😊 Knowing Khushi - loved it 😊

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monsi08

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#589

Read dis agn... loved it more d 2nd time 😃

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Khuarv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#590

I just came across "knowing khushi" and read it one go
You are an amazing writer 👏 . Have read your ur other
works earlier. Loved reading this one. Rofl at the crazy antics
of khushi and am in love with the Arnav of this os 😳 . Khushi
storing arnav's number as bankelalji was surely the icing on the
cake🤣. Kudos to you for this amazing os. Looking forward to come
across more of your wonderful work.