Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi#2 Part 13 (Last) Pg 63 - Page 61

This is definitely one of the most endearing ss that I have read about our favourite couple. Kudos to you for writing about such beautiful characters. They are both funny, serious, cute and heartwarming. Your khushi is absolutely phenomenal. She is the epitome of all things attractive, innocent, and charming and of course humorous. Simply loved their conversations through out. The first meet at his work was hilarious and poignant at the same time. The words that she uses to describe the snake were so good. I would love to bring this khushi home, I mean literally. She is so lovable. No wonder our guy fell for her completely. Their conversations in the bathroom couldn't,t stop laughing. Your arnav is charming too, very likable. I know that I will read this ss a million times so please do not remove it from the forum any time soon.

I'm not a writer,nor a critic. And not even a literature student to give long comments on your works. I'm just a reader who misses IPKKND and all characters of the show who where actually living for me not a fiction.

COMPLETED again...Now what will u say Rashmi...what should I do now????

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

COMPLETED again...Now what will u say Rashmi...what should I do now????

Originally posted by: rulama

Living Without You 😆

Hi,

I.am reading your work for the first time, I have really enjoyed this story,a different and fresh take on shyam fiasco
I loved khushi's entry, it was hilarious wen arnav suggested to act as baaifriend n girlfriend

Oh the whole story was adorable

Just completed reading knowing khushi and let me tell you I have this smile on my face :)
I loved how you started, their meet and the reason behind it was something I would've never thought of!
Liked how their bonding went stronger through their late night calls, khushi's sankiness and arnav's naughtiness :D
I really really enjoyed this story! Off to read other series :)

wow i am speechless, this is an amazing piece of writing and i absolutely loved it! just read the whole thing in one go, was supposed to sleep hours ago but kept clicking on the next link thinking 'just one more' and here i am! i loved how u crafted the story, the depth u gave to every character, how u twisted the ipk story premise into something so different and beautiful and funny and heartwarming and pure! and i especially love ur ever irrepressible and innocent and crazy sanka devi and her akdu but sweet and precious laad governor - they r sheer perfection and i loved and adored them insanely ❤️