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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

that was such an amazing ending :) loved it

everything was written perfectly

everyone's emotions were portrayed beautifully especially arjun's

felt so bad for the parents of that little angel

raghu is so disgusting and cheap 😡 how could he do this to a girl

liza and shree scenes were lovely

love the way shree consoled liza

loved ariya and pari's scenes

the way arjun hugged pari was beautiful and then love the way pari wiped his tears

awww both father and daughter were feeding food to each other :)

arjun and riya's conversation in the end was super cute :)

going to miss har pal yet again 😭

thanks for the pm

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@MriduB

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

That Raghu was indeed an animal! 😡

Haye nahiii!!!

Har Pal khatam?😭

Aisa thodi hota hai! 😭

Not forcing u this time to continue! Kabhi Kabhi story continue karna difficult ho jaata hai I know! 😛

Thanks toh humein kehna chahiye ki u penned such a beautiful story! Hats Off! 👏

Waiting to read something new! 😉

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

First of all thank you for bringing this FF back to us.🤗.There would not have been a better ending to this kunchu.The case reminded me of the 2cruel incidents in recent times.How can a person be so cruel to do such an act?
Coming back to the update,Arjun-Pari moments were cute.His outpour of love to his daughter was amazing.Later family time of Every member was beautiful.Thank you once again for Har Pal dear.😊

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

The case was so cruel and gave us a bitter taste of reality!

Awesome end ...you ended it perfectly!

loved it!

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Moumi

@Moumimon

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

it's Awesome yrr.. loved it...

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

super duper awsum fantastic...
omg that raghu... 😡 how could he do that to a little girl... these kinds of people should be hanged... just hate this harsh reality of life...
everyone's emotions were beautifully portrayed...
every couple scene was lovely...
raesha planning to start a family... and for shriza its a start of something new... chottu sona scenes were lovely... the way she made his tension less...
and ariya fmily was picture perfect... with pari... love the way riya provided comfort and strenght to arjun...
theie scenes with pari were a treat to read... wow finally unki bhi family planning start ho gyi...
beautiful ending to a very lovely story...
loved it... gonna miss it...

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Kya har pal end ho gaya...

[x)]

Mein to aaj hi comment karane wali thi...

Hey dear sorry yaar...and thank you so much...u send me pm on each update...

I going to read this in one go...

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Haleemah

@hal96

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Lovely update e lxcludin dat raghu
God i wanted 2 kill him
Love how aisha n riya gave silupport 2 sam n aejun
Shree 2 liza was cute
Ariya n samesha wer adorable
Am sooo upset dat dis is da ending
But lyk dey say werever ders an end ders always a new beginning
Lookin forward 4 oda stories
😊

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..pink..

@..pink..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

The case was ...umm wat to say...very disturbing
But the update was gud...and I am glad I didnt feel it anywhere to b rushed up...

Raghu was a monster...sheesh!!! Why such cruelty exist in this society

Story of every couple ended on a positive note...with a promise of happiness and bliss in their life...😃

It was very lovely story all together..
And yes v readers had a gud tym with u too🤗

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#500

First, apology or late commenting...(i was out of town & unable to check the inbox,...& i'll be missing for a month onwards.)
Now... the ending is a superb one a nice , sweet ,happy ending that I was expecting... good job yaar!!!!!!
just keep writing like this,... wishing u all the best for your other works.
Thanks for PMs.