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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Lo 1 thr gaya 2nd thr mai khatam hua toh mai ab padh rahi hoon..
Meri phooti kismat.
Chodo..
Update was amazing.
The case is good.
I just hate raghu.
Koi itna brutal kaise ho sakta hai..wo bhi ek bachhi ke saath..
The hell.
Not only raghu , all those cheap thinking minds..
Isn't there anything else in this world apart frm desire, that lead to abuse a small girl, who even never seen the actual world..
Grrr..

Hats off tht you you bring this topic.
And i love the concern of arjun as a father for pari.
Just loved them.
Shree liza so cute.
Sam-ayehsa so good.
Thanks fr pm

banner is fantastic

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

u have lot of impact of gudiya case and its a best case how u described the emotions... Nice work

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Awwwsssmmm... ending
loovveeddd it
will miss Har Pal a looottt

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

hii dear rd da 2nd part of it at 1st watchng u hv strtd it agnn iws realyy happy bt now finalyy it endd..end is extrmlyy touchng dear

dis end hv a extrm hurshh touch of reality

dis kind of bloody living things r realyy presnt dis days(cant say dem animal , dat wl b degreadd animals)

all desrvs death

as a fathr arjuns feelngs r soo real

all r moved on der life sriza,chotu,raesha

n now finalyy ariya also wana move 2 complt der family

lv da end wid dis sweet dcsn of family extnsn of ariya dear

bt ek reqst vi hayy dear

plzz ek aur stry likhho plzz bt a funny 1 not serious a 1 ..am crvng 4 dat wud ariya shriza raessha chotu onlyy

keep wrtng dear

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

AWWW!!!!!

you ended it!!!nooo!!!

but a lovely end...seriously loved...!!!

all the families much needed comfort is avaiable..

loved ariya and pari moments...consoling,convicing everything...!!!

Sameer taking comfort form Aisha lovely...!!!!

start of shree and liza fnrdship and more was good...

and chotu relaxing in his wife sona lap...

lovely!!!!!!

thank u!!!

thanks a lot for such a wonderful story!!!

👏👏

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Res...

I am Speechless!! Jab kuch soch payi to edit karoongi!!

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

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all i can say is... Thanks... thanks a lot for giving us "Har pal"...

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

awesome...

raghu 😡 wish to kill him ... hw could smeone do lyk dis to a kid???

deserved to be shot...

was waiting for the update ...

banner is nice ...

happy ending ...

will be waiting for ur stories...

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

Really sad part... reminded me of the recent incident in Delhi where two such perverts brutally ra*ed a 5 year old girl...😭😭 Very touching... Not in a position to say any more

All the members reacting to it ... as citizens, as cops, as family, as parents and as would be parents... 👏 ... beautifully written...

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

And this one ended too...

What a sad day...

You ended Har Pal, Vidya ended Rab ne banaya Jodi and Haru26 ended While You were sleeping,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, 😭😭😭

Did you all plan it?

Three very entertaining and touching stories ended today 😭😭

Lets hope for new beginnings after these 😛

Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#490

hi kunchu di🤗... awesome part...n too heart renching one...

just cant believe that raghu😡😡😡😡...did the lil kid...i hate these shits to my core🤢...sorry for using abusive word...bahut rulaya aapne di aaj😭😭😭😭...

well arjun's love for pari was just so heart touching n so was natural...when he just ran away n hugged pari ...it was too emotional 😭😭😭😭... whole etf was so disturbed with this case......

liza's condition was so miserable because she has to perform autopsy on her dead body😭😭😭😭😭...so shree's concern for liza was nice... chotu shona😃😃😃... riya ka trick kaam aa gaya😉...pari the only medicine of arjun😆...too sweet father daughter relation❤️...

arjun riya pari n new comer😃😃😃...n aisha sam n n their baby😃😃😃😃...will always miss har pal❤️...thanx for such a beautifull story di🤗