Vignettes- 18. Hai re Nandkishore! Thread 1

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#991

Yay me!! Reswa
Hope u are feeling better Aparna... Will come back for English version

Unres

Devi Maiyya ki lakh lakha shukar hain...You are okay!!!

And thanks for the looong update... The story is proceeding smoothly... too smooth? Are you planning something?

Loved Ram-Lakshman-Hanuman talk... You have Khushi's cheekiness yourself it seems.. 😆

And what i loved the most was Khushi-Bittu scene... Who else is better than Khushi to put Bittu at ease, not letting him be scared by her family's status? No one else can do it like her. That part was Bang on, Aparna 👏

Also liked how Pooja's parents were made aware about NK's feelings. Rather than telling them straight, if they saw his concern for pooja, it is more convincing.

AND loved the small Arnav-Khushi moments too! 😳

Waiting for the next part,

Love Ya! 😊

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#992

Res
Ok I'm in the second spot 😆 in resing.
Aparna, its good to know that you have recovered fro your illness.
It us overwhelming for a lower middle class family from a village to understand the dynsmics of the Raizada khandaan.Pooja's parents are in shock and they are behaving like an ostrich nowand ignoring the elephant in the room.Its upto Khushi to break the ice and amalgamate the two very different families...the caste, status, background...everything will disappear in front of true love ...and the lovable machinations of Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada 😊

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#993

Loved the update...now Pooja's parents too know everything...aur Khushi toh hai ha kehlwane keliye...awesome...
PS: when Khushi called Dhurv hanuman ji...I love it sooo much...
Thanks for the pm...

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#994

Res

UnResing...

Sorry for the delay... i was browsing the story on my phone n it did not allow me to post a comment!!! anyway here goes...😲

The update was good... the opening, displaying the hustle bustle of day to day activities was so nicely portrayed by u... loved it!!!! 😉 😃

then came the hospital n the surgery, it was aptly done!!!! pooja n NK sure left pooja's parents in a questionable state... they sure are gonna have a lot of answers to know.!!!!!!

well, now that the surgery's been done hope she gets well soon and NK starts his happily ever after life...👏

p.s: sorry for an incomplete comment... was out of town and browsing through the phone and did not realise only part of it was posted here!!!!!

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namrata22796

@namrata22796

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#995

Loved this update...

It was really light...

Waiting for the next one...

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#996

Post the english version.. I am res-ing until then!

Thanks Apsy girl... for the second PM...

That was a nice update, seriousness interceded with humor which was predominantly Apsy style...

I loved the quiet romance at the end of the update too.. Very relaxing and quite satiating... What esle does one need in life...

Your portrayal of the family members brought back to me the happy but mad crowd that the Raizadas are... Well written piece!!

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IPKWA

@IPKWA

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#997

Res.

Waiting for the English version :)

Unres

Thank you for the long update!

I'm curious how Pooja's parents will interpret the Raizadas' help from now and I loved the Khushi and Bittu conversation!

Also I think you are a genius for writing a story that is not centred solely on Arnav and Khushi yet you give us such beautiful Arshi moments! Ex. Khushi fixing Arnav's tie while he was talking to NK.

Glad you feel better!

-Maya :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#998

haila yaar what an update
so her parents too know huh about nk confession
dont worry none of those questions you have will have any affect on him
in fact he would be heart broken if he cant have her as his wife
but there is still some time for this
ahhh so bittu wanted to know more about arnie and family huh
well they have a huge family dear
but like she said they are very big hearted for sure
and hope your sister fits in well in all this
am sure she shall right
but lets wait for pooja to recover then shall think about it
awww arnie has got more things to see in nk absence
but soon he shall be back
and arnie so right they shall never know when khushi had pooja agree to marry nk right