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Posted: 12 years ago
with every update, u get me to become more emotionally attached with this ff!

this update was truly very beautifully written and very explicit with their feelings and emotions! super loved it!

really glad that after all that happened between these two there is still a level of comfort between them and how easily they are managing a proper conversations with little glimpses of their past over these 7 years!

khushi must have felt very lonely for her to be so delusional as to create the perfect family with the guy she loved so much! i think it was the only thing that kept her going:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Some relationships transcend most conventionalities. Garima. Pankaj and their daughters, and Arnav and Khushi. I am enjoying the certainty that Khushi seems to have acquired over seven years.
Enjoyed the updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
a beautiful beautiful chapter. loved the emotions displayed throughout. really glad you gave in to your urge and wrote it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Second meeting

arnav khushi always share unique relationship

it takes time for him to move on

khushi experience in africa make me how people survive there
she ready to share it

and her imagination world make my heart cry for her
she deeply love him but time and circumstance never with her

she's alone still alone with her fear pain and emotions

and arnav he's always with her but again time is not with them "I couldn't take it off as it was physically and emotionally impossible to do so.
when he said this

my hopes enhance that relationship ready to fight with world again whatever the consequences are there

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Khushi's grief, guilt and punishment are imaginable! She has taken so much on her shoulders... That I don't even know if she tells Arnav of what.. If she will be able to let go of it!!

Great chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Update...Loved it a lot...
You have in the simplest of words expressed the most candid expressions and emotions of both Arnav and Khushi.
Khushi has seen and dealt with horrific situations in these 7 years. She must have been so lonely to have imagined a family to help herself deal with it...Feel so bad for her...
Loved Arnav's candid admission that he wears the gold band because it is physically and emotionally impossible to remove it...Feel bad for him too...he has been suffering for the past 7 yrs without knowing the real reason for it...
I am very eagerly waiting for Khushi to tell Arnav the reason behind her running away and Arnav's reaction to it...
Also where is Akaash? He was helping Khushi find out the truth behind her past. So what happened and why did he have to leave?
I am wondering if one of the reasons he left is that he has onesided feelings for Payal and could not bear to see her marry someone else
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😛😉😉😉😉😉😉😉


greattt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am so grateful that I came across this story!!! it is amazing, and i was immediately drawn to it. You are one of the best writers I have read. I am so curious about Arnav and Khushi's past and what's in store for them for the future. And how Arnav is going to react when Khushi finally tells him why she left. And I just want them to be together :(
love love love the story! keep up the amazing work, and if you have an index of other works I would LOVE to read them too!
can't wait for the next update!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is when I read tales like this...that one realizes how love conquers all...

They have held onto each other for the past 7 years and they admit that so naturally and easily...though I still am interested Khushi telling him the reasons why she left him at the altar...but at this moment, nothing else really matters...get it? Its just them...

and have to mention that every time you give us an insight to how Khushi spent her days for the past 7 years...it reminds me of the time I visited Uganda 3 years back...tough experience, but memorable and every bit of it is itched in me, be it good or bad...and especially waterborne diseases and the lack of safe and clean water...Its not easy for anyone to bear it through, and no wonder Khushi decided to dream her own future with Arnav and their kids...thats like the string of hope she held onto...distant dream and hope...

beautifull updates so far!
your notes in the end also get me thinking...will try to comment regularly and also pen down some of my thoughts in response to your note :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just...perfect. I have no words...👏

A question: have you worked with NGOs or worked in the kinds of situations Khushi faced in Africa? Or do you know people who have? I found this aspect of the chapter fascinating!

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