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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#991

very nice... the feelings out very easily..

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Frida

@Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#992

Loved the Interlude 2 & ch-20

The description of how this family came together was really nice. None of them are related by blood & yet the bond between them is so strong.

Arnav & Khushi are finally opening up to each other. I like the way their story is progressing with every update.

Waiting to read more!

Thanks for the pm.

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Viji

@-Viji-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#993

The story of the parenthood was superb...even payal is an adopted daughter...such a sweet family...
Arnav and khushi and their convo...no words to say abt that...the way khushi said abt her imaginary family...omg u write it so beautifully

Edited by vqwerty - 12 years ago

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#994

Hi, Sorry I could not read and comment the FF for last 4 days as I was travelling...

Really awesome preludes...payal's confession, how garima and pankaj became parents...shyam's interaction with khushi...arnav and khushi conversation...superb updates...Thanks for all the PMs

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vks11

@vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#995

this is a good FF. i love it. Please PM me.

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#996

hey came across ur story...a friend suggested...and m glad she did...coz till now i had been missing reading something this good...i have read ur lonely under the sheet and i just love ur writing and perspective towards the things/situations...will love to read more...plz do accept my buddy request...

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#997

sorry i m coming online after a long time soo here is all the comments...

frm part 15th to the latest...

part 15...

love with loneliness are the things tht could teach everything to a person...

the same thing happens with both arnav an khushi...

khushi started to cook non-veg for his to remember him and he became veg...

tht was the thing which both were tried for each other but coudn't change...

well arnav's forwardness tht he don't want to know the truth for now really heart a little...

nicely described...loved it...

thnks for the PM...

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@sherlockthor

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#998

very deep story... you are really different from the run of the mill writers..
only think is i want more interaction of arnav khushi!

excellent story!
waiting for the next part!

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#999

for Interlude[I] ...

mothers are always mother...typical them...same is garima...

it is said that we realize the importance of relations when we are not with them...here when khushi selected her favr8 branch and go far frm her frnd then she realize the actual means of being wid frnds...

nice part dear...

well...i didn't understand this part exactly...sumwhere i thing it is bonded wit the future of both khushi and arnav...lets c...

thnks for the PM...

Edited by manikka - 12 years ago

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1000

for part 16...

nice one...

seeing her parents together in the kitchen talking casuals and lightly has exactly burned her heart...more after her sudden meeting wid arnav...this was wht she wanted frm her life...but her life was complex of course and she exactly don't know how to handle all the relation on this stage when each thing after a long gap seems different...

wooo...i didn't expected this atta fiasco...and certainly not payal coming to help her...

and tht it...payal has only blamed khushi for her miseries she was right upto some extent...

the weight of grief it tooo much to carry aone for payal but she forget tht she has a family and her friends wid her but khushi was all alone somewhere and no one with her...

gr8 part...

thnks for the pm

Edited by manikka - 12 years ago