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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Oh I love the Payal - Arnav conversation. It was heavy with underlying shared hurt but still deep in its foundation. They say people find their best friends in shared joys and shared sorrows. Maybe there is some truth to it afterall

I love your writing! It's rather snappy.

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

I loved the updates so far. Khushi has done some hell of a job in the Africa I should say. Everything else looks very trivial in front of miseries that human beings undergo during worst times. I became emotional when Khushi describes about how just a water pipe brings joy to the small boy. We have no reason to complain, whatsoever, god has been kind.

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

This story is more than the individuals. I like the fact that Khushi is a civil engineer and has a sense of doing right. It is so true that in our country we have our regions of absolute underdevelopment that need people to contribute their skill and knowledge to improve the situation...agree with this reason for her return.

But there is so much happening at the personal level with all of them and Khushi's arrival is bound to shake things up. So Shyam's character and sleaze are well known even though not acknowledged by his own wife. Why is he still being tolerated by Arnav? Waiting to read all that happened seven years back and why he was stood up at the mandap.

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Roopa

@roops82

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Loved the update!!!!

Payal and Arnav are friends and they seemed to be bonding well..

Thanks for the pm!!!!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

I, being from Rajasthan can understand the need Khushi has to provide water to people in the villages.

Can't stand Anjali and Shyam. Why doesn't Arnav kick them out ofhis house.

Don't want Khudhi to work with Shyam, though I am sure they will cross ways sometime sooner rather than later. Loved the relationship between Arnav, Payal and Lavanya. I share Arnav's opinion about social networking sites. Never wanted to be a part of all this.

Why is there tension between Payal and Khushi?

Need to read the next part really fast.

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

very nice story line read all 4 parts in one go. cont soon.

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thesis

@thesis

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

wow that was jus amazing it was so real man i am done reading these stories where arnav is the good boy and listens to his sister like sum obedient child i am glad ur being realistic about her marriage and how it is affecting their relationship i love ur intensity man keep rocking thanku for the pm

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

I loved the whole concept.so khushi ditched him at the mandap and vanished just like that.why is the thing i want to know and will wait for story to unveil.

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Neel

@neel123

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Nice story. Love your writing.

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

I am sure you have heard the saying that "Ignorance is Bliss" but its only a bliss till it strikes again. And here I kept hoping that he would inquire about her, but then again why would he...

You must have heard about Water for People, which closely works with NGO to supply water and sanitation through out the world. And the fact that Shyam is part of NGO has left me bedazzled, but then does he have other motives behind his charitable measures...

Excellent take S

Edited by -Aarya- - 12 years ago