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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
It's an awesome work 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

RB,

I read the update and wanted to change the emoticon but thought of letting it be as the PM for the update cheered me, even if the update was depressing.



I actually don't own a laptop :=) Just a massive desktop... :D
Yeah this FF is gonna be a bit depressing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
oh god,i understand payal's rejection now...
its khushi's part I am waiting
this is an awesome update Barbie...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Man if are comments are gonna get us back to back updates am willing write a couple of comments thats gonna make open a new thread seriously i feel for kushi man it was beautifully written yes she has been selfish but am so eager to find our yy i love these characters already ps i love the angryyy arnav of urs am glad u came up with this concept man its soo unique where things srart all messed up am looking foward to more magic from u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
What other burdens does Khushi carry? Such sorrow in the wake of her leaving. It's true nobody and nothing is the same after what happened...how do they move on from here, that is, if they do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Thank you so much for the pm.and thank you for an early update.
A lot things happened in their life after khushi left.at first i thought payal was just upset with khushi coz she vanished without confrnting her.but here she's bitter and she has every right to be.but khushi might have done that for a valid reason.is shyam behind any of this?.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: RockBarbie



I actually don't own a laptop :=) Just a massive desktop... :D
Yeah this FF is gonna be a bit depressing...

I don't mind taking that too :)
No issue on the depressing bit, a good story is all I ask for and my demands are limited. Give me daily and at times two updates a day, I am a happy person.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Ouch. So much has happened in the past, and the way your unfolding it is just so soo captivating! I dont want to blame anyone here, and thats because you make me understand each persons view with the way you described their emotions and feelings towards a particular event that has changed their lives for good or bad. I think Payal's reasoning as to why she does not like Khushi anymore is justified, and then so is Khushi's for feeling that burden on her shoulder, however, even then, I feel as if there is so much more as to why Khushi took such a drastic step to leave the altar of her marriage. There must be because the way you are protraying her character right now...it shows that she is a type of girl who introspects, thinks, and is smart with her decisions...but then again, in the past, this may not be true...all in all, lots of tangles that khushi will have to untangle to be accepted and remove the guilt and burden...

and this is only payal...i CANNOT wait to read Arnav's side of the story...

You are an amazing storyteller seriously!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
oh mother of God! back to back updates. delicious!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really don't know for whom I should feel sad...
That was surely not a good welcome for Khushi from Payal..but then you can't blame her..7 years is indeed a long time and with the death of Dev ,things and situations change..we really don't know what made Khushi to take such a huge decision in the past so I don't want to jump in and blame her..
Why did Khushi ask her dad whether Payal married or not?She was in touch with them right?how come no one mentioned about Dev to her?
How old is Khushi??

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