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thesis

@thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

heyy i read all three chapters in one go i know this is gonna be an incredible story ur writing is amazing and beautiful its easy going an relaxed doesnt seem rushed cant wait for the next update i know from ur brand of story telling that its gonna be intense will it be too much to ask if i ask u to pm plsss

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nee

@march2011

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

she left him in mandap..ouch,,,

the fact she was working in Africa for needful person its great...

the search of peace???

there are so many secrets here

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awsm n sooo interesting...
waiting 4 da story 2 unfold...
lovd ur way ov writing...
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thnxxx 4 da pm dear...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Wow this is getting more intriguing with each update !
Arnav is nursing a bruised ego and not to mention heart .
But khushi's reactions are fascinating me ,everyone around her is so flustered and the way she is absorbing all that is so I can't seem to think of the right word maybe calming .
Civil engineer and working in SA ,love this khushi.
So many questions but eagerly waiting for the next update !

Ps : missing mom's champi also !!

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Wow Khushi was the runaway bride, am intrigued to learn more... she is well educated and her parents seem to be supportive of her... Arnav is still a mystery, was it something he did that made her leave him on their wedding day.. Suman knows, Lavanya knows, so it cannot be some harsh secret and they are all not happy that upon learning Khushi has returned.. so far Arnav seems to have all the sympathy but there has to be more this than meets the eye right ? Love that you update frequently

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Gandhi had once said, "The volunteer has the potential to be the change they wish to see in the world and with this potential comes a responsibility."

Khushi is very impressive, especially with her awareness and responsibility towards the world around her. Her passion to make a difference not only in other parts of the world but also her own country; truly very commendable. And yet it always amazes me that three-forth of the world consist of water and yet we can't get water to the people in need...

Though leaving someone at the altar for a greater cause, can not always be forgotten or forgiven! It's too early pass a judgement on any character, let's see how the story unfolds!

Ps. It took me a while to figure out that most of the time your update titles have nothing to do with the content of the update, and I have always wondered why is that...

Edited by -Aarya- - 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Thank you Kalyaani for pointing me to this story! This is intriguing to say the least.

Stories with shared histories are a favorite with me and this one seems to be right up there. I am already beginning to like the protagonists...all of them...the angry sister who (i think) still cares, the mother who understands just the way mothers do, and the two in the midst of all this who are entangled in a complex web

Waiting for the story to unfold!

PS: Small suggestion. Could you please include the link of the next chapter at the end of each chapter when you update - since you are just starting, it will be easy and it is hugely helpful for readers who start reading :)?

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

The past and present is intriguing.

Too many questions to be answered.But that makes me want to read more.

Lovely chapter!

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: meera30
PS: Small suggestion. Could you please include the link of the next chapter at the end of each chapter when you update - since you are just starting, it will be easy and it is hugely helpful for readers who start reading :)?

True - pretty neat idea. Updated last two chapters. Though the other FF might take a while :-)

Edited by RockBarbie - 12 years ago