Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi Part 9 Page 123 (Mar 4)

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#911

Hey i read all 9 parts in one go...a wonderful story. I really like kushi arnav dialogues ..wawesome..please update soon...

Waiting for the next part..

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#912

Awesome update
Loved it
Finally his true colors will be revealed
Thanks for the pm

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#913

awww i thought they will have more time together but even this much was nice, Khushi is so damn hilarous

& uh oh Shyam's in trouble now 😉

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#914

This part was so awesomely awesome!!!!!
Thank you so much for long update!!
Arnav and Khushi are so sweet:-) The scene at the temple and their phone calls are so so nice!! The trust that Khushi has put in Arnav and the change we see in Arnav as he talks to Khushi is so well done.
I cannot wait to read Shyam's truth come out! It will be great to read.

Good job Smita!! It may be time for a new thread soon!!
Dhinkha chika dhinka chika (I am a non dancer so this is my very pathetic dance to show you how excited I am !!) [:D/]

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friends_4dream

@friends_4dream

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#915

awesome
plz pm me when u update

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GunM

@GunM

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#916

khushi is really very innocent

love the conersations between Arnav and Khushi...how they understand each other

cant wait for Shyams downfall

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Shivani

@shivani15

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Wow amazinnggg .. you are fab.

I love this OS.

Please continue soon.

Can you please pm me too?

😃

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#918

oh smitar, I just came across this wonder. Oh I'm so happy you have a new story, your work is always so calming, so soothing, so beautiful, I am always eager for more pieces from you.

love
sonia